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07/13/2004 10:16:45 PM |
| Very nice and appealing photo. Only problem I see is the bottle is crooked and would probably look better if it were rotated slightly to straighten it out. Still very nice...8 |
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07/13/2004 08:49:21 PM |
| great work, this is what the challenge is about. A 10 |
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07/13/2004 02:04:31 PM |
| A cut watermelon would have had more impact |
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07/13/2004 11:25:17 AM |
| Makes me thirsty! Nice job. |
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07/13/2004 01:22:01 AM |
| Very nice. I'll have one. |
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07/12/2004 12:35:41 PM |
| I think this could have been better without the net in the background and with the top on the bottle. Ew! Who wants to drink what someone else has opened?! |
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07/11/2004 04:21:04 PM |
| Nice idea. It is quite a bit overexposed. I suggest next time you need to shoot something outdoors like this, you bring along something to diffuse the light a bit (a white umbrella, a sheer white curtain, something along those lines). The cropping is a bit tight at the bottom. There should be a little space in front of the product. Also, the bottle is tilted quite a bit. Nice effort. |
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07/11/2004 11:57:34 AM |
| very nicw idea - Gatorade should use it - a bit over exposed and the bottom cropped tight. The composition is wonderful All three elements tell a "summer" story. I like the way the botttle leans right and the lightning bold points left. I like the colors and the pink which reminds me that the inside of that melon will be pink. |
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07/10/2004 10:03:06 PM |
| Your sky background is a little grainy. Your grass is crisp and sharp, and the cold wet bottle looks pretty refreshing. I'd center it a little to the right, and tilt the bottle a little more straight. |
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07/08/2004 04:04:46 PM |
| need just a little darker contrast especially the sky |
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07/07/2004 11:14:22 PM |
| Nice idea. The net seems out of place, and the tilt in the bottle really bugs me. |
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07/07/2004 02:43:39 PM |
| Great idea. Very nice composition. The net in the background -- excellant touch. This would make a great ad. Suggested improvement to really put it into land of awesomeness... dip the jug in water or spray down or something, showing drops of water...would really give impression of refreshing then! One of my top picks. |
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07/07/2004 01:47:06 AM |
| Good pic. The colours are awesome and the bottle is well-focussed. In my opinion, I only make a little change. The grass is too focussed to me... it´s a little bit distracting. I´d prefer to see the grass less focussed... Good work. 7 |
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07/07/2004 01:13:17 AM |
| I think you should have cut the watermelon open... still, neat idea! |
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