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07/13/2004 09:12:56 PM |
| Need a bigger mound of ice cream - let's emphasize the product |
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07/12/2004 03:50:05 PM |
| I wish the ice cream wasn't so blurry, because while I understand that breyer's is important, the ice cream in the foreground is the product. Still, I liked this photo. |
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07/09/2004 11:23:55 AM |
| Yum! The ice cream could have been in focus a little more but a tempting photo never the less. |
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07/09/2004 02:22:04 AM |
| This is a good idea. I like the layout. I think it might look a little better if there were another scoop of ice cream in the bowl, more like the box picture. Maybe even a peach slice.The ice cream in the bowl also looks a wee bit soft, lacks a little appeal. Maybe play with lighting to get rid of the shadow across the letters at top. |
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07/08/2004 07:02:02 PM |
| nice idea. looks like the ice cream in the bowl is a little too bright though, and the detail of the paper towel underneath both shows up. |
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07/08/2004 04:12:43 AM |
| Tough shot to get with a short DOF. A good effort I think. |
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07/08/2004 12:16:01 AM |
| this is a good picture everythings peachy keen...lol..great job n goodluck |
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07/07/2004 09:40:25 PM |
| The ice cream is a bit out of focus. If you were to show more of the bowl of the ice cream, keeping both the bowl and the original container in sharp view, I think the photo would be much better. |
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07/07/2004 07:17:05 PM |
| Definitely needs a deeper depth of focus. Is that a paper towel backdrop? |
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07/07/2004 05:19:59 PM |
| Needs more DoF to keep the ice cream in focus as well. Doesn't look appetizing. Looks like bright blob. |
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07/07/2004 04:00:24 PM |
| The ice cream should have been in focus to make it appealing. Now the focus is on the packaging and I would not buy a product for its packaging. |
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07/07/2004 10:04:21 AM |
I don't like the ice cream being out of focus in the front/center of the shot. It's a good choice otherwise. The inside of the bowl could use a little cleaning up as well, you don't see to many adverts with 'food mess' on the inside rim of a bowl, unless it is intentionally done to show how quickly and messily people gobble up the grub.
The lighting isn't to bad either, except for that one patch across the top of the word Bryers. If you had a directional light that could have been pointed 'up' at the lid of the ice cream container that might have disappeared. |
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07/07/2004 03:34:18 AM |
| focus on the bowl will be better |
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