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07/08/2010 06:29:55 AM |
| This picture is a whole after-the-event poem. Nobody understands poems. |
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07/07/2010 05:14:47 PM |
I'm going through the entries, stopping at those images I feel have had the benefit of an unconventional eye and dwelling a little longer to try to see and appreciate what you saw. This is one of those images.
Positives: I kind of like this image, the way it reminds us of a little-looked-at world the rolls under our feet as we go about out business. You have managed to communicate texture to us in a very effective way.
Critical stuff: Given the elements of the image and the limited interest in the scene, I don't find the framing adds much. I was one of he things that you, as a photographer, could have and should have optimised to get the most out of the scene.
Overall: OK as far as it goes; and I do like the premise of the image; but in the final analysis, I'm not sure the whole delivers enough to be successful. |
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07/06/2010 11:43:25 AM |
| Must not be a winning ticket! |
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07/04/2010 03:00:23 PM |
| Maybe more macro would have worked better - I do like how the pink from the ticket ties in with the pink of the petals(?) |
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07/02/2010 01:25:15 PM |
| the color theme is interesting but I am not pulled into the story this is trying to tell |
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07/02/2010 12:46:13 PM |
| I couldn't figure out what the main subject of the photo was until I read the title. In fact, I didn't even see the ticket until then. Maybe some vignetting or selective focusing could have helped me out. |
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07/02/2010 08:52:05 AM |
| I like the simplicity of this shot. I think if you put the in the cross hairs of the rule of thirds then the focus would be more on hte ticket. Also if that stick wasn't there would help I think. My eyes kept moving back to the stick. Great idea. Tones were complimentary. |
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07/01/2010 12:11:32 AM |
| Grog sees ticket. Is ticket to rock music concert? Grog love rock music! Grog love anything with rocks. |
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