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12/10/2002 09:18:40 AM |
Critique Club
Initial thoughts
Strong colours, interesting composition.
Composition/ Content
I like the diagonal lines and curves in the image and the way you’ve got in tight to the subject.
My main problem with content/ composition is that the text – such a recognisable logo – is upside down. This doesn’t feel right to me.
Background
Clean, unobtrusive.
Camera Work - Technical
Focus seems satisfactory though not pin sharp – perhaps that’s because of the low resolution.
Lighting also acceptable though the Pepsi white text is just a little too greyed in shadow.
Digital Processing - Technical
Seems fine.
Fits The Challenge
Yep, absolutely.
Your Opinion On The Photo
I think this is a good image and the ranking would likely have been better if it hadn’t suffered from comparison with a similar entry this week. I like it more than many that ranked more highly.
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12/08/2002 10:49:02 PM |
| mmm product placement. did they pay you? :P composition works well. 8 |
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12/06/2002 05:01:15 PM |
| A few more condensation drips woulda been great, but nice anyway! |
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12/03/2002 06:13:00 PM |
| Why the one empty space on the top corner? I'm serious. I don't understand. It's a very clear picture with beautiful colors. Very clear and sharp. I just don't understand the crop. PTL |
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12/03/2002 04:53:00 PM |
| Nicely done, cool abstract version, nice colors. |
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12/02/2002 04:36:00 PM |
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12/02/2002 03:23:00 PM |
| I like it a lot! The waterdrops, or condensation really add to the photo, and good use of blank space in the back! Very crisp, and clear focusing... you can see every detail which is lovely! I would have wiped the drop off the white P but thats just bersonal preference. An excellent macro, which is very blue! Good job, Good Luck! |
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12/02/2002 12:31:00 PM |
| very good image--9bobgaither |
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12/02/2002 09:53:00 AM |
| Would have been great if it had more water drops. |
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12/02/2002 05:03:00 AM |
Now with a little Ice on this baby then I could see. Not a bad Idea. Colors are represented nicely. Not a bad shot
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