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not so "cloudy and windy day around home"...
not so "cloudy and windy day around home"...
cyparis


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: First Entry (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Pentax K7
Lens: Pentax DA 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 AF
Location: Le Plessis Robinson - France
Date: Jul 18, 2010
Aperture: F10
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/60
Galleries: Urban, Landscape
Date Uploaded: Jul 18, 2010

retake of my very first entry...
just for fun... I have learned a lot since then.

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08/01/2010 04:05:58 PM
Thanks for all the comments...
08/01/2010 01:58:36 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club...

Re-shooting previous images in your collection can be an excellent way to improve your skills. Over time, you will gain an understanding of how images can be improved based on your own learning and feedback you get from others.

Landscapes are difficult images to compose... You have to find a way to connect your viewer with a scene that they aren't familiar with. This image doesn't seem to have that connection point and there is no particular subject element that draws me in as an outsider to your scene. The time of day that this photo was shot doesn't lend itself very well to intriguing lighting. Most of the interesting detail in this scene appears to be in the shadows... Maybe an alternative perspective and time of day could be chosen to create something more magical about this scape...

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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/21/2010 08:53:40 AM
Much better lighting, focus and PP this time around :)
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07/19/2010 09:26:35 PM
I am missing the main focal point here. And I don't know which 1st entry you are trying to emulate.
07/19/2010 05:41:50 PM
this just isn't a very interesting shot. The stream is kindof plain and the shadows overwhealm it.
07/19/2010 05:23:13 PM
cyparis' first entry
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07/19/2010 11:29:37 AM
your shadows are very dark, which for me is loss of detail
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07/19/2010 10:51:20 AM
Nice photo. It's really interesting how the different lighting can bring out different details in each shot.
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