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Cigarette Break
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Challenge: Free Study 2010-08 (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Panasonic DMC-FZ50
Location: St. Petersburg, Russia
Date: Aug 16, 2010
Aperture: f/5
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/250
Galleries: Urban, Street
Date Uploaded: Aug 27, 2010

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Place: 140 out of 360
Avg (all users): 5.7073
Avg (commenters): 6.6667
Avg (participants): 5.6702
Avg (non-participants): 5.8276
Views since voting: 574
Views during voting: 203
Votes: 123
Comments: 6
Favorites: 0


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09/07/2010 10:52:57 PM
brilliant collage

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09/07/2010 05:23:53 AM
Good shot, I would have been tempted to grunge it up with some curve editing but the brightness makes an interesting foil to the tawdriness...
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09/06/2010 05:08:32 PM
Feels very voyeuristic. I picture you in the bushes with a telephoto. Maybe it works here. The processing, especially on the girl, doesn't feel quite right.
09/04/2010 08:59:47 AM
I'm going through the entries, stopping at those images I feel have had the benefit of an unconventional eye and dwelling a little longer to try to see and appreciate what you saw. This is one of those images.

Positives: There are a number of features of this image that I like - the slightly tone-mapped look suits that suits the image; the story behind the girl and the shop - we wonder if she works there or at the adjacent property - we wonder what she makes of you as you take the shot. I like the overall composition too - where you have placed the various elements within your frame.

Critical stuff: Not much - the deep shadow on her face means we don't have eye-contact. I'm not sure if that would improve the image any but it would certainly be different.

Overall: A great offering.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
09/04/2010 12:17:56 AM
Excellent street scene.
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09/01/2010 08:58:02 PM
address please, lol
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