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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Words (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Kodak CX6330
Location: My bedroom, Oceanside, CA
Date: Jul 12, 2004
Aperture: f2.80
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/8 sec
Galleries: Emotive, Persuasive
Date Uploaded: Jul 12, 2004

Adjustments:
flash off
brightness 20
R channel

Statistics
Place: 177 out of 253
Avg (all users): 4.5812
Avg (commenters): 4.0909
Avg (participants): 4.4472
Avg (non-participants): 4.6703
Views since voting: 1160
Views during voting: 409
Votes: 308
Comments: 15
Favorites: 0


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07/28/2004 02:28:35 PM
Thanks John! I really appreciate the critique. I'll remember everything you told me for the future!
07/27/2004 10:21:05 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club...

Hi Sarah...

I don't believe I have had the pleasure of commenting/critiquing any of your work before...

This image fits the challenge. The score you received shows a below average result overall. I believe that your score probably reflects the overall 'quality' of the photograph for the most part. Unfortunately, here at DPChallenge, the general populous prefers crisp and clean images. They don't really look beyond that to examine your idea and your thought process as much. This is an unfortunate fact though. Sad but true.

As I looked at your profile and noticed that you are a 16 year old female, I can see the relevance of this photograph quite easily. That information, however, is not avialable to the challenge voter. Since it is early in your 'career' here at DPChallenge, I will give you a couple suggestions that will help improve your scores.

1. Strive for crisp and clean photographs. If your camera struggles with this concept, use a tripod ALWAYS.

2. Never use your flash as a light source for a photograph.

3. Simplify your 'subject' and fill the frame with it.

Cheers and good luck :)

John Setzler
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/20/2004 11:23:13 PM
This image suffers from a bit of noise from the low light. Personally I'm not fond of the composition.
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07/20/2004 07:43:29 AM
hilarious
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07/19/2004 05:30:06 PM
Not very good photography, but okay composition.
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07/17/2004 04:23:28 PM
lol! :) But, if I were, my butt would be ablaze... ;)
  Photographer found comment helpful.
07/16/2004 07:15:55 PM
And set my ass on fire!? No way!
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07/15/2004 05:27:10 AM
I gather this message isn't meant for me? The focus seems a little soft, but that's what you may have been going for?
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07/15/2004 05:09:36 AM
very nice but needs more light - too much noise.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
07/14/2004 10:05:08 PM
there are no words
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07/14/2004 04:03:01 PM
Me?? :)
J/k
In all seriousness, I like this shot, and the lighting, but I wish you had someone in the other half! The image is a bit blurry also.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
07/14/2004 01:10:25 PM
A nice idea, but your lighting is too low, and the camera was unable to capture the detail and sharpness necessary for the image. Try more ambient light with the same exposure length, or lengthen the exposure some but shade the visible ligt sources so you don't get spots of bright white. I might suggest cropping the nightstand out as well, it's a little out of place.
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07/14/2004 11:36:17 AM
cute... the WB seems off a bit tho & maybe crop off from the left a bit with perhaps a different angle.
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07/14/2004 10:16:54 AM
The Idea to me is real good. the light was a big issue in this shoot.
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07/14/2004 01:06:13 AM
heh.


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