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07/20/2004 07:48:32 PM |
| Firstly this is an incredible composition given the topic. You selected and composed this shot very well. Sadly I think it would have benefited from more light to bring out the white of the page against the ivory of the keys and to brighten the tones in the fabric at the top of the shot. I think you should take great pride in having an eye for this composition and the DOF you exhibited. Very nice. The one nit with how you laid it out is the words on what appears to be a sheet of paper on the far left of the image just under the sheet music. The power of this shot is derived from the topic "Words" and your creative vision wherein the title of the music are the only words easily in focus for the viewer. The other words just become slightly distracting. Contrast this with the much smaller words both above and below the title; these are not distracting as they are almost unreadable. |
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07/20/2004 05:29:40 AM |
| I think the composition is ok but were there no real tulips? |
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07/18/2004 08:27:31 PM |
| Great idea. I love the photo. I love Marlon Brando. 10 |
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07/18/2004 10:13:50 AM |
| Nice! Good concept, and laid out well. Maybe a little more focus throughout would have made this image even more powerful. |
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07/18/2004 01:39:54 AM |
| Nice job but it a real tulip or rose would have been better. |
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07/15/2004 11:39:15 PM |
| Nice idea - along with great colors. The cut off petal at the bottom should have been avoided as well as the triangle in the top left corner. |
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07/14/2004 09:10:23 PM |
| i like the color & still life, but the composition & quality is lacking |
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07/14/2004 06:41:36 PM |
| kewl shot .. brigher green for the leaf could have added some extra weight to the contrast. Very well done |
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07/14/2004 06:17:09 PM |
| focus is a soft in the bottom-left, but very good nonetheless |
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07/14/2004 01:14:12 PM |
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07/14/2004 08:30:16 AM |
| nice composition, but the focus is a little soft. hard to say if you need a tripod or to adjust your settings. |
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07/14/2004 07:35:52 AM |
| great idea....good composition |
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07/14/2004 12:55:58 AM |
| Good idea, I think it´s a little out of focus |
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