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03/06/2004 06:52:18 PM |
Interesting idea, and well executed.. Thnk I might have tried the whole bottle in shot, possible landscape? Seems to have been a bit oversharpened? (Halo on cork and down LHS of bottle?) |
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10/30/2003 09:19:18 AM |
Beautiful expression of blue. great shadow. I love it. well done. Thank you dear. Best shootings, BIliana |
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12/10/2002 05:12:44 AM |
John
Mucho gracias for your comments on my blue entry... I agree that shadow only wouldn't have worked - I'd have had too many comments about focus and fuzzy edges etc. I figured the crisper lines of the bottle would give a contrast to the fuzzy shadow.
I think the light is a little harsh - and will try and remember to diffuse the light source next time.
The corks are very very pale so even in the underexposed shots came out very pale. If I were really serious I could dye them with tea bags to make them more brown...
I tried a few alternatives, all located here: Kavey's Blue Images but was limited by the teeny size of the drawing pad I used as background. Of course if I hadn't been too lazy to get dressed I would have gone out and bought either larger size paper or some material.
I am surprised not to have had any comments on the kitsch title!
Thanks again for your time.
Kavey |
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12/09/2002 03:46:12 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
Hi Kavey :)
I think this shot has quite a bit of visual impact. The 'blue' here is definitely strong and significant in the shot. As I commented in my original comment on this photo, I really like the curved shadow. I think that's a nice touch for sure :) Did you try a straight shadow with some different light angles as well? I believe that the impact would have been equally high in that interpretation as well.
I read through your comments on this shot... I disagree with a lot of them... I don't believe that shooting only the shadow would have had much impact at all. The only impact i think that would have produced would have been comments asking to see where the shadow came from :) Your directional lighting is working very well in this shot. I don't see any issues with that at all. I would have experimented with several background scenarios on this shot as well. i would have tried some cloth with some smooth wrinkles and curves in it as well... white cloth :)
Great shot and keep up the good work :)
John Setzler
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12/08/2002 11:19:21 PM |
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12/08/2002 09:16:05 PM |
Good use of shadow. The composition is good. -arnit |
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12/08/2002 12:39:19 AM |
I bet you were taking a picture of that jug and you found the shadow more interesting. |
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12/07/2002 01:30:56 PM |
excellent photo... I really think the 'bent' blue shadow adds a nice effect to his shot... great work :) |
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12/06/2002 01:42:16 PM |
The composition of this is very pleasing to the eye. The fact that the shadow is curving upward in such a nice "swoop" gives the photograph a feeling of movement even though everything is obviously stationery. The only one (small) flaw that I find is that the white of your background is a little on the grey side. I know you could have fixed this in post precessing, but you might have lost the blue shadow impact so I am guessing this is the best compromise you could do. Nice 8 BAMartin |
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12/05/2002 06:09:16 PM |
Nice Effect. I like it. jacko |
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12/05/2002 04:14:09 PM |
I love the balance this has. The blue shadow really adds a lot to this. Wonderful use of thirds ! Shiiizzzam |
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12/02/2002 09:08:00 PM |
Nice shot. Like the color, the focus and the light and shadow. Nice. Justine |
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12/02/2002 08:16:00 PM |
Excellent use of shadow...and colored blue to boot!...Good Luck! |
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12/02/2002 04:41:00 PM |
If it were me, this would be a photo of the shadow only. But I like it this way, too! |
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12/02/2002 09:59:00 AM |
What might have made a more interesting shot is to show only the shadow. I feel by having the half bottle in the shot, the eye isn't sure what to look at. |
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12/02/2002 02:07:00 AM |
nice use of the refracting light ~anachronite |
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12/02/2002 12:44:00 AM |
Hmmmm. The Flash hurts. Diffuse it with a piece of white clothing
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