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11/16/2010 11:46:11 AM |
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11/01/2010 04:30:35 PM |
| thanks for the votes guys, for once i'm not on the last 3 pages of scores.. lol |
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10/13/2010 10:23:53 AM |
Hi Monica, welcome to the Critique Zone! Naturally everything I might say is subjective, so take anything you might find useful...
My initial impression of this is that it is very bright, and very yellow. There is a hugh contrast between most of the photo and the eyes, which is (to me) a little unsettling and some areas of interest (around the hands and apple) are lost off the bottom. I have to be honest, I struggle to find it appealing. Why?
Technically: You have a really sharp camera / lens combo there, I know, I have it too. With such a small aperture you should have a seriously sharp picture throughout, but it's not quite there. The ISO setting is also introducing some unnecessary noise. I would drop that to 100 and use maybe f6.3 at most on this. The shutter should still be plenty fast enough - I would still set it at 1/160 which should make it a little darker than you have it, bringing some of that lovely detail back. The lighting is also rather harsh on such delicate skin.
Artistically: This really needs to be razor sharp - and there is no reason it couldn't be, even if you have to manually focus (focus on the eyes!). In composition terms, as I said I feel it is 'cut off' a little high - maybe more apple could be in there for contrast? Also, it is worth trying to compose so that the eyes are on a 'thirds' intersection.
Post: You say that you adjusted everything, normally I stick to sharpness (before and after resizing), curves for contrast and a very light touch on the hue/sat. For advanced editing I will normally play with dodge and burn but that's about it. Remember, the more you process, the more you lose what was there in the first place!
In summary, this is a fairly pretty shot of your child (?) - but I reckon you can produce something better with the gear and eye for a cute moment that you clearly have. |
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10/07/2010 09:41:56 PM |
I have to like this. The tones are delicious.
Revisiting this. I have to also comment on the softness which gives it a timeless sort of quality. And the the way her eyes beautifully complement the golden tones throughout. Really good. |
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10/02/2010 01:53:09 PM |
| LOVE the vintagy pp. That gaze is mesmerizing. |
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10/01/2010 10:14:53 PM |
| OMGosh!!! how cute! i love the colors and great candid capture! |
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10/01/2010 03:30:33 PM |
| Nice portrait but the lighting is rather harsh, you've retained detail well with the exposure, good luck |
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10/01/2010 01:24:53 PM |
| I think I would have cropped this just above her eyes so that all the focus would be on the eyes. Otherwise a wonderful image! A marvelous capture of innocense. |
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10/01/2010 03:41:42 AM |
| A family photo album. Could be better though. 5 |
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