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08/13/2004 03:12:49 PM |
Now why change a good catchline? It's now 'Make the Most of Your Break.' If it ain't broke don't fix it in my view.
This shot could have been much improved with two main changes:
1) Off-centre the main subject - the tip of the KitKat (perhaps showing a length of the stick receding)
2) Get in closer with less background - and retain perfect focus. If focal range is too short, pull out and crop the rest away. There's some nice texture and that there KitKat and it's a shame not see it more clearly. |
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07/27/2004 10:58:56 PM |
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07/27/2004 09:46:26 AM |
the kitkat is slightly too central but I like the depth of field in it |
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07/27/2004 02:20:38 AM |
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07/27/2004 01:51:27 AM |
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07/25/2004 12:18:12 PM |
Good macro with extreamly shallow DOF. Still the background distracts a litle since it´s such a high contrast. But the idea is fine and pretty well performed. |
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07/25/2004 07:51:55 AM |
the bighter oof areas overpower your main subject making the shot a bit too blurry for my taste. |
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07/25/2004 06:18:12 AM |
this is the nice picture with colors... |
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07/23/2004 05:16:35 PM |
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07/22/2004 06:46:02 AM |
Like the depth of filed and the sharpness of the broken kit kat!!
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07/21/2004 03:44:10 PM |
A lovely effect but the silver shining in the middle in front of the chocolate is distracting. |
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07/21/2004 01:58:42 AM |
Too much extraneous stuff, in my opinion |
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