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12/14/2002 01:07:31 AM |
...from Critique Club...
Hi Gerard
FIRST IMPRESSION:
Cool...looks liquid. :)
COMPOSITION:
I think the composition could be a bit better. There is so much going on on the photo, that it's hard to focus on one thing only. Eliminating some elements, or shooting at a different angle could help. :|
TECHNICAL:
Pretty good. I think a bit more DOF could help...especially for those who don't quite know what they're looking at. Focus on the front 'ball' is good, and I guess that is what you wanted. I guess you used whatever lighting was available, the problem, I find is that it reflects quite a bit off the glass. :(
ARTISTIC:
Awesome. I think you picked out a very interesting subject whose physical properties make it almost liquid like. I love the shapes and sofness of the shot. :)
OVERALL:
I would love to have one of these so I could shoot a ton of shots. I think you would be suprised at the potential of this subject...especially using the colors you have chosen for this one.
Cheers. |
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12/01/2002 04:37:49 PM |
| Interesting idea. Really neat reflections. It is growing on me. Initially scored it a 6, I guess because it didn't greatly interest me, but after looking more closely at the details, I like it more. The reflections off the 19 degrees top is cool! 8 Swash |
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12/03/2002 09:00:00 PM |
| the title doesn't fit the picture in my mind and the picture is not very interesting. |
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12/03/2002 07:19:00 PM |
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12/03/2002 08:08:00 AM |
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12/02/2002 04:01:00 PM |
| Better be glad he was left out. He's the only thing in focus. Anything that went in is distorted. Don't ge sad, be glad. Needs more focus. PTL |
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12/02/2002 05:29:00 AM |
| Hmmmmm. Unnaceptable. Not that mine is any better. |
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12/02/2002 01:31:00 AM |
| nice take on blue... good dof... well done |
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12/02/2002 01:16:00 AM |
| nice.. it almost tells a story... it's not just an image of blueness |
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12/02/2002 12:29:00 AM |
| The hot spots bother me... try less direct lighting next time. This definitely fits into the blue category! |
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