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07/26/2004 08:48:07 PM |
| I don't think the color of the sheet works well, seems unnatural. Cool idea, I would have prefered a deeper DOF. |
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07/25/2004 11:14:57 PM |
| good idea, but it would be nice if the chocolate balls in the front were in focus. |
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07/25/2004 09:07:29 PM |
| Too many chocolate balls in soft focus. Interesting composition. Lighting a bit harsh from flash. |
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07/24/2004 03:13:43 AM |
| Good idea. I think a few simple things could really improve this image. A neater surface for the subject like a board or table top that wouldn't get ripples in it. I think if the image included more of the hand and a bit of the wrist it would balance the composition more. It looks like you used a flash making the lighting a bit sharp. I think a light setup to one side would create some interesting shadows across the surface and would reduce the white dots on the chocolates. I also would have focused the camera on the chocolates at the front of the shot. The way you placed the chocolates works for me creating a nice "random balance." |
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07/23/2004 04:21:12 PM |
| I like it very inagenative |
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07/23/2004 12:14:59 PM |
| A fun idea, but the technical side of it doesn't do your idea justice I think. The lighting is uneven with harsh shadows, the choice of backgroud color really doesn't add to the subject IMO, and the focus really seems off. |
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07/23/2004 04:43:01 AM |
| seems the focal point should have been the closer 'marbles' 5 |
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07/21/2004 05:21:07 PM |
| Cute! But the closest of the milk duds is blurry and your eye is drawn to it as a viewer. I think the lighting could be more evenly distributed throughout as well. Nice idea though. |
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07/21/2004 10:52:06 AM |
| funny idea, but i think it would have been better to have the closer chocolates in focus and the hand blurred. |
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07/21/2004 08:26:36 AM |
| putting the hand in focus was a good use of dof, I'd like a bit more of it showing. Straightening the tilted horizon and the wrinkled cloth would help. |
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07/21/2004 01:56:20 AM |
good idea, would have been better with white cloth, with no creases, for
more effect. |
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07/21/2004 12:43:43 AM |
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