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12/09/2002 11:21:06 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!!
I noticed that this is your first attempt at DP Challenge. First and foremost, I hope that you will not be frustrated by your finish and not continue with the challenges. My first couple of shots didn't do well either and I have learned so much in my time here.
A couple of fundamental problems with your shot. The biggest seems to be your lighting. It seems to be underexposed which in turn leads to graininess and lack of focus. The red glare on the right is also a big distraction. If I'm not mistaken, the Blue Cards are transparent so you might have shown a light through it to emphasize the blue color.
There is also a reflection of your camera on the card. A definite no-no unless the photo calls for it.
I like the angle that you used although you might want to crop out the number at the bottom. All in all, the card certainly meets the challenge but you needed to bring out the blue color a little to confornm to the scoring. Good luck in future challenges.
DougPaz |
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12/05/2002 09:07:52 PM |
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12/02/2002 09:27:00 PM |
| the red splotch and the camera reflection distracts from the rainbow effect. use of a polarizing filter might have helped. |
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12/02/2002 04:44:00 PM |
| Not enough blue in the pic, and the title doesn't really make sense. |
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