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07/28/2004 03:39:44 PM |
| Thanks to everyone for their helpful critique of my first DPC entry. I have learned so much already and hope this is just the beginning of many more learning opportunities to come. |
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07/27/2004 11:43:15 PM |
| Lovely rich reds. The brown and texture to it make it actually look like (sorry) a turd. Touch more DOF to get a little sharper focus to the strawberry on the right. The leaves have great detail. |
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07/27/2004 11:12:34 PM |
| Change can be a good thing. The condensation reminds me that a little effort may be required but the results can be delicious. Wow points for the excellent close-up. |
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07/27/2004 10:50:02 PM |
| I like the vibrant red of the strawberry and the green looks sharp, fresh, and vibrant too. Personally would have preferred a little more white space on the sides of the shot to balance it up a little, and the water droplets on the plate are a little distracting. |
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07/27/2004 01:58:30 AM |
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07/25/2004 09:57:18 PM |
| Really fantastic color and detail. My only complaint is the drops of water on the surface in the foreground that distract a little from the overall image. |
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07/25/2004 04:24:04 PM |
| crop a bit tight on the left and right. |
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07/24/2004 11:16:53 AM |
| this is just lovely, great color and texture, 10. |
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07/24/2004 03:20:49 AM |
| I love the brightness and colour of this image. The effect is bright and cheery. I would suggest that perhaps the right strawberry could be turned a little to show a bit more red. Also I would leave a little more white space on each side and add a simple border. Love the colour and texture though. |
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07/22/2004 05:03:18 PM |
| Great shot. the lighting is a bit harsh, however |
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07/22/2004 11:34:54 AM |
Good focus, colors and idea! Only a note: i don't like the drops of water on the white table (this is not a problem for the vote!).
Ops... another note: i'd like to see more red on the covered strawberry.
Good work! |
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07/21/2004 11:46:08 PM |
| A slightly softer light would have be nice. |
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07/21/2004 10:41:33 PM |
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07/21/2004 06:32:17 PM |
| nice picture but bizzare feeling about the whater... i think i will be better without a7 |
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07/21/2004 04:11:11 PM |
| Great colours and detail. Not keen on the water either on strawberry, chocolate or surface. Composition is not particularly strong. Maybe having the two strawberries at a more varied angle from each other? |
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07/21/2004 02:01:53 AM |
| Great photo! The strawberries are a little off-center. I'm kind of compulsive about that stuff, but this is a great idea nonethless. 8. |
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07/21/2004 02:01:15 AM |
| Before and After, or "Interracial Strawberries" I like it either way... |
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07/21/2004 01:47:08 AM |
| Very well taken, the plain strawberry looks delicious but the chocolate on the other strawberry looks wet. |
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