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07/29/2004 03:09:23 PM |
Hello from the Critique Club!
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Well, that's certainly a hands-on approach to the packaging.
I like this idea, but I find that there is too little context to suggest what is inside other than simply reading the label. Had this been a box with form and shot at an angle - maybe even half unwrapped - perhaps it would have been communicated better without relying on the wording and title.
The cropping is tight horizontally, making for an awkward format.
This is an image which, although fitting the challenge, may not endure well outside of the competition. You may find it useful to consider 'notonline's' comment and endeavour to produce even challenge photos that could grace yours (or other people's) walls.
Cheers
Jon |
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07/26/2004 10:45:39 PM |
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07/24/2004 12:01:47 PM |
| very original, the paper is a bit distracting? |
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07/22/2004 06:19:42 PM |
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07/22/2004 10:23:59 AM |
| interesting shot but not a picture I would hang on my wal or expect to see on display anywhere except that company. |
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07/21/2004 06:39:23 PM |
| really cool.... background should be more even next time a7 |
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07/21/2004 02:06:53 PM |
If only that was the handprint in the Jim Thorpe prison... it'd be like the Everlasting Gobstopper!
If you don't know what I'm talking about, follow this link: //www.visitjimthorpe.com/new/history.htm#handprint |
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07/21/2004 10:26:44 AM |
| Interesting and creative composition. |
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07/21/2004 09:37:22 AM |
| clever idea, must have been fun cleaning up |
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