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07/27/2004 11:37:31 PM |
Gonna get messy. The color of the chocolate looks red to me, almost as if it were blood. the top left is a little too blown out. |
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07/27/2004 01:19:54 AM |
Did you want the chocolate to look more like blood? It's red on my monitor..or atleast orangy |
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07/26/2004 11:44:03 AM |
Good idea and crop. Though I feel problems with WB, the chocolate seems to be too brick-red for me and lighting is too harsch. For an erotic effect, use more diffused and mystical lighting, to avoid blow outs and strong shadows. I feel your border a bit rivalising with the main subject, choose a less wild colour for the inside thin line. Keep trying. :-) (3) |
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07/25/2004 11:41:41 AM |
Not a bad photograph, but it doesn't meet the challenge criteria in my opinion. Also, I think it's "Sensually Sweet" (two l's). ;-) |
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07/24/2004 06:30:08 PM |
I like your shadowing you've captured, however the chocolate looks too red |
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07/22/2004 10:30:23 AM |
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07/22/2004 08:49:54 AM |
In my opinion this is not a very appealing shot. The chocolate does not look dark enough to pull this shot off. Glad to see hat it looks more like art the advertising tho. nice lighting and clarity and composition, just not fussy on the color of the chocolate. it looks to me more like body paint or something along thoise lines. <7> |
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07/22/2004 05:40:36 AM |
The premise for this photo is very good...however the color of the chocolate itself, on my monitor, is a bit too red/orange to be truly effective in that regard. It almost appears "bloodlike" rather than as chocolate. This, of course, could be my monitor. The placement of the hand is a bit awkward...perhaps, instead of his own hand, a feminine hand, or his and hers? Possibilities abound. Lighting is good, just a tad harsh on the left edge. The lines and composition are nice...I think a lot of photographers forget how sensual the curves and lines of the male physique can be, as most are more interested in females. Thanks for this reminder to us all. Great effort. :o) |
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07/21/2004 06:27:40 PM |
no no no not sexy a bit ! a3 |
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07/21/2004 05:42:03 PM |
im not sure that this is the right lighting for a 'sensual' shot...looks almost like he just got shot. |
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07/21/2004 04:34:57 PM |
Nice composition. I like the low lighting but it's giving too much of a colour cast. That chocolate unfortunately looks more like fake blood and without the context of the challenge I'd assum it was meant to show an injury. Darker brown might be better, I don't know... |
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07/21/2004 09:45:56 AM |
I think it's hot, but some voters may be repelled by the way the chocolate sauce looks like blood. |
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07/21/2004 05:19:33 AM |
alas it doesn't look like chocolate but more like blood. Not really appealing |
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07/21/2004 02:07:41 AM |
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07/21/2004 01:01:26 AM |
Pretty bright lightling. The chocolate looks a bit red..? Maybe try bouncing the light. Good luck. |
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07/21/2004 12:30:09 AM |
On my monitor it doesn't look like chocolate. More like BBQ sauce or thickened tomato soup. |
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