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12/22/2002 07:42:41 PM |
Critique Club
INITIAL RESPONSE: Nice colors, Good Idea, Miss the hand playing them, empty lower right corner.
COMPOSITION-CONTENT - I like the content a lot, Light is nice with the 2 black parts like balancing each other. It seems to me that the lower right corner is a litle 'empty' whithout 'defining' the rest. I like the colors a lot the green and yellow/gold mix is very nice.
I like being able to see the texture of the wood.
CAMERA WORK-TECHNICAL- Good depth of field and exposure. I guess it was not easy to balance the light correctly.
DIGITAL PROCESSING - TECHNICAL - Nothing specific to say so .. perfect to me.
MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO - I like this photography and I think the colors and the angle , because unusual, are very nice. I like the color a lot. Looking at the picture I keep thinking like 'what make the string vibrates and keep wondering igf it would have been nice seeing the hand finishing the movement in the lower right part of the shot.
Anyway it's a nice shot. Congratulations.
Lionel
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12/16/2002 05:27:43 AM |
Thanx for all the kind comments!
My best running submission so far! Yuhu!!
To jgillard:
You are absolutely right regarding the strings on loosing on the fretboard: I worked long on that issue but could not manage to get them better seen. When I moved the light closer to the strings, interior of the guitar was visible through the hole. That didn't look good at all.
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12/15/2002 11:17:52 AM |
| Good thought into this one. |
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12/14/2002 12:40:07 AM |
| Neat composition. Good colour |
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12/13/2002 06:29:37 PM |
| A curious orientation for this photo. |
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12/12/2002 08:46:05 AM |
| great angle for composition! great idea too! |
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12/11/2002 11:08:33 PM |
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12/11/2002 11:33:44 AM |
Great perspective, composition, use of DOF and lighting. Wonderful capture of movement and mood.
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12/10/2002 02:54:58 PM |
| Really pretty perspective shot. Nice job. |
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12/09/2002 05:11:59 PM |
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12/09/2002 05:03:17 PM |
| Well done! Everything except the two chords is absolutely calm! Good focussed! I like your guitar - 8 - KAOS. |
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12/09/2002 04:06:56 PM |
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12/09/2002 12:43:16 PM |
| Too bad you kinda lose the motion with the vibrating string at the fretboard. |
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12/09/2002 08:49:30 AM |
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12/09/2002 07:03:32 AM |
| Good lighting and concept, excellent use of DOF, great shot. |
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12/09/2002 04:35:09 AM |
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12/09/2002 01:13:41 AM |
| Great idea. Nice angle. 8 |
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