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08/03/2004 02:22:46 PM |
| too much blur, too little contrast |
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08/03/2004 02:16:42 PM |
| A good choice of subject. Work on focus and try studying rule of thirds and general composition. |
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08/02/2004 07:23:48 PM |
| Tippy, but this could be a good thing for this photo, it gives you an uncomfortable feeling about time passing... the ceiling at the top left, and the door frame at right distract from the subject, and may take away from the artistic tip of the clock. because instead of just the clock being tippy, it is now the entire room, and it just makes you wonder if this was taken on a cruise ship, or something... Hope this makes sense!! :) |
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08/01/2004 04:32:45 PM |
| Well - time is not an everyday object - but the clock sure is. The image does not present your idea very well |
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07/31/2004 02:12:23 AM |
| right edge needs to be cropped. actully it would look nicer if the whole photo was cropped too much empty space on the sides. i like the black and white |
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07/30/2004 05:08:27 PM |
| I don't know what you were wanting to achieve for your vision, but the problems I see are poor focus, tilt not corrected, lack of overall tonal range, and no real "interest" in the shot IMO. |
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07/30/2004 08:21:46 AM |
| The motion blur, combined with the tilted subject and overall darkness makes this image unappealing to me. The distracting door frame (?) on the right should also be cropped out. |
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07/30/2004 08:17:52 AM |
| The lighting is a little dull. It would help to rotate the image so that the clock was straight. |
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07/30/2004 06:30:57 AM |
| the pic don look really good but it match the topic |
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07/29/2004 02:12:54 PM |
I have to say it, terrible shot, crooked, badly composed, badly lit.
The door frame or whatever it is and ceiling should have been out of shot.
Preparation for the shot is my main criticism, sorry if I am too blunt but it needs saying for you to improve. |
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07/29/2004 06:06:55 AM |
| For some reason I really like this photo. I would like to see the door frame and ceiling gone though. |
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07/28/2004 11:48:14 PM |
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07/28/2004 11:01:09 PM |
| Nice except the reflection on the left site is distracting. |
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07/28/2004 08:25:36 PM |
| nice idea. seems a little blurry and a tad tilted. the reflection is somewhat distracting. good luck. |
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07/28/2004 11:45:55 AM |
| I like the blur from the motion, but there seems to be a reflection in the glass that doesn't fit with the rest of the image. |
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