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08/08/2004 07:40:00 AM |
Critique Club
Overall it is a good idea, meets the challenge and has a strong appeal. What I don't like here is a SUNSPOT! There is a sunspot that could easily be touched up and would improve the overall image. Possibly had you touched that up you would have been looking at a 6 or higher. The title works well and was an excellent choice, it's just that sunspot the ruins the whole thing. |
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08/01/2004 07:09:22 PM |
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07/29/2004 05:46:18 PM |
Kind of the idea I was going for in mine, but I wasn't explicit enough = P
If not for the flare from the sun, I think this would be a great shot. A tighter vertical crop should fix that up though. Nice work. |
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07/29/2004 04:41:35 PM |
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07/28/2004 02:03:03 PM |
| OOOh I can imagine this album being TERRIBLE, but lovely image so well done. |
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07/27/2004 08:38:19 PM |
| Beautiful shot and fits well with your title and text. |
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07/27/2004 08:09:44 PM |
| Great submission - the perfect image for religious songs. It does look like an album cover - I can see it on the shelf! My only problem is that you've used three different fonts - which was not necessary. Finally - I think a more "golden" font color would be better than the bright yellow. Overall - it's a rel winner! |
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07/27/2004 07:05:34 AM |
Lovely shot here. Title is a bit weak.....picture would definately suit a "D........P.......Classical type of title. Still this is very pleasing to the eye. Good choice of colour on the font.
Nice composition using lines from the road. |
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07/26/2004 08:25:15 AM |
| The photo looks a bit soft. USM could sort that out. Also the text kinda gets lost in the photo. Try adding a black outline to it, and maybe a dmall drop shadow too. |
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07/26/2004 12:42:49 AM |
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07/26/2004 12:28:08 AM |
| Beautiful shot! The white horizontal lines down the right line are a bit disconcerting. |
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