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Challenge: Best of 2010 (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Pentax K200D
Lens: Sigma 70-300mm f4-5.6 DG MACRO for Pentax
Date: Oct 10, 2010
Aperture: f8
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/100
Galleries: Black and White
Date Uploaded: Feb 13, 2011
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Wm. Blake, "and did those feet"
[Feb. 20th, 2011 01:36:02 PM]
Crofton Mills, Vancouver Island
I never see this without thinking of William Blake's poem, which, set to music, we sang every year at my school's closing:
And did those feet in ancient time.
Walk upon Englands mountains green:
And was the holy Lamb of God,
On Englands pleasant pastures seen!
And did the Countenance Divine,
Shine forth upon our clouded hills?
And was Jerusalem builded here,
Among these dark Satanic Mills?
Bring me my Bow of burning gold;
Bring me my Arrows of desire:
Bring me my Spear: O clouds unfold!
Bring me my Chariot of fire!
I will not cease from Mental Fight,
Nor shall my Sword sleep in my hand:
Till we have built Jerusalem,
In Englands green & pleasant Land.
(Blake's original is without apostrophes. It is untitled and appeared in his preface to "Milton," a poem). |
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03/03/2011 12:27:22 AM |
| The smoke from those stacks glows, an eerie dark and dismal landscape that sparkles and glows. |
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02/22/2011 08:08:35 AM |
| What Penny said. Something quite different with the poem. My lukewarm comment clearly only scratched the surface. |
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02/21/2011 02:15:12 PM |
| On my first viewing it appeared too dark and the whites too white. But together with the poem, which I didn't know, it's just perfect - in fact rather luminous. |
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02/20/2011 01:34:51 PM |
| A little too sharp, Maybe too dark, maybe not. Great composition. |
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02/20/2011 04:41:50 AM |
| Nice and dark gothic industrial |
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02/19/2011 07:30:04 PM |
| great contrast and use of b&w |
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02/19/2011 05:48:53 PM |
| I like your composition, but why so low key? I wish there were some whites in this photo. |
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02/18/2011 12:41:29 AM |
| really interesting would like to see it a little lighter |
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02/16/2011 12:16:15 PM |
| Not enough pop! Looks muted and needs some more white |
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02/15/2011 06:20:34 PM |
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02/15/2011 01:59:13 PM |
| Beautiful industrial photograph. Love the irony of the imagerly most people have of the title vs. the reality. |
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02/15/2011 12:10:16 PM |
| NOT my idea of Jerusalem at all...makes for a great industry challenge |
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02/15/2011 07:09:23 AM |
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02/14/2011 10:45:41 PM |
| I love the lightness of the smoke. I wish there was just a tad more definition and light on the factory. Nice use of B & W. |
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02/14/2011 10:43:13 PM |
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