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04/17/2011 01:00:09 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club:
This is a highly accomplished image; no doubt about that. I was very pleased to read your notes and find out how planned this shot was - created if you will.
The result has many compelling features; for me though, the star is not the well made silhouette but that wonderful froth of round bokeh and how it merges as we move left to produce the perfect juxtaposition and background for your subject.
I'm with you, I certainly think story-telling had a place in this challenge - more than a little too and yours works - we begin to wonder what your subject is thinking about and how her life has played out on this, the day we meet her.
Overall, this is nice work. I think it deserved a higher finish - I'm pretty sure it would've scored higher in a straight Free Study and that's not so bad is it?
Well made.
Paul |
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04/14/2011 09:56:01 PM |
Very thoughtful. Nice to see such an honest image. |
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04/08/2011 11:13:49 PM |
Very creative, magical, beautiful. I only wish for the slightest hint of eyelash. |
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04/08/2011 12:56:08 PM |
sillhouette and bokeh - what a lovely chance for rumination. |
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