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04/17/2011 11:55:19 AM |
Greeting from the Critique Club:
Well, if you are going to shoot between neck and knee it would be a shape not to shoot this! It is a very interesting bikini after all ;-)
I like how this is suggestive of a Bond movie and I also like how the play of shadows on her skin creates interesting lines - like the way we can see she is wearing sun glasses.
Body and bikini aside - I think we need to ask what added value your photographic choices made.... the most eclectic choice you made was the lateral crop - was this the full frame? I actually think this is a good choice but it may not be for everyone.
I think the coloration is bang on, it creates a feel-good sunny impression.
If I had one criticism it would be the story - or lack of it; your close crop constrains our view... I wonder how this would look in landscape orientation with more to her left and right; the inclusion of some environment context is often goos for story telling; of course you may have just spared us more sea!
Paul |
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04/12/2011 11:58:50 PM |
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04/12/2011 11:38:53 AM |
| A very nice body you have captured there. |
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04/10/2011 06:54:48 PM |
| Lots of shadows, great model |
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04/10/2011 12:55:02 PM |
| I like how natural this pose is/looks. I also like the position and the cropping of the hands. I think that really adds something to the composition. |
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04/06/2011 12:30:15 PM |
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04/06/2011 12:20:13 AM |
| Strong visual interest for me. :) |
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