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12/18/2002 09:11:13 AM |
This photo could of defnintly been much improved over what I submitted. Check out //www.pbase.com/jgillard/dpchallengemotion
to see what I mean. The reason I left this image not cropped/etc was because it was too noisy. Once I learned about neatimage (after the challenge had begun) I could of submitted a much better photo. Oh well. I was busy studying for my finals anyways and did not have much time to put into the challenge this week ;) |
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12/17/2002 12:41:23 AM |
Critique Club
Composition Too centred with to much uneeded space at the sides. Shows motion.
Background - The background is too dull!
Camera work The image is technically good but very dark.
Digital processing The colours needed some hue and saturation to lift them a bit they all look rather washed out
My Opinion
The image meets the challenge but needs some life the colours are too dull and the image doesn't say look at me! |
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12/15/2002 10:58:26 AM |
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12/13/2002 06:40:08 PM |
| kinda cool... some nicer looking stairs would be better though |
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12/13/2002 05:31:43 AM |
| I thought about doing this too. This is pretty good. You definitely can see good motion here. - Inspzil |
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12/13/2002 05:10:43 AM |
| A verticle format to show where its going next would help. There is too much dead space at the sides. |
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12/09/2002 11:16:24 PM |
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12/09/2002 02:05:08 PM |
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12/09/2002 01:05:12 PM |
| Heh... I could never get those stupid things to work! :) |
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12/09/2002 12:47:15 AM |
| It walks down stairs alone or in pairs and makes a slinkety sound :-) |
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12/09/2002 12:34:40 AM |
| that's what it pretty much looks like anyway, right? still good photo |
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