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Challenge: Fireworks V (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Canon EOS-40D
Lens: Canon EF 28-135mm F/3.5-5.6 IS USM
Date: Jul 4, 2011
Date Uploaded: Jul 5, 2011

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Statistics
Place: 54 out of 62
Avg (all users): 4.8361
Avg (commenters): 6.0000
Avg (participants): 4.9429
Avg (non-participants): 4.7931
Views since voting: 298
Views during voting: 330
Votes: 122
Comments: 5
Favorites: 0


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07/10/2011 09:29:48 PM
My preference would be a more focused image. I like where you were going with this, but again, the focus is missing for me.
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07/10/2011 04:53:45 PM
looks like a flower,very pretty,i like it.
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07/08/2011 07:50:24 PM
It's flower in the night...well done.
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07/07/2011 06:13:00 AM
Hey Kevin. I actually scored this a 7 so I am caught off guard by your 4+ score. Sitting here looking at the image a little bit longer I can probably give some feedback as to why it would be scoring low even though some of the issues are not big ones for me in this issue. I liked the simplicity of this, the colors are pleasing, the curved tips on some of the streaks and the square crop. I like the almost abstract feel of it. I do wish there was a bit more black around the image as a whole to better frame in the burst. I may have also jacked up the saturation everywhere but the center. Ideas as to why it may be scoring low - I guess the streaks may seem a bit soft but probably the biggest issue is that from a composition perspective it is just a single burst with no other dynamic or interaction around it. Like you were saying - it is not a scene. Full scenes do score better because it gives more of a story. That it is just a centered shot is probably hurting it too - but again that falls into the dynamic of the scene. 5 of my top 16 images (including yours) were of just a burst or multiple bursts - the rest were scenes (all my very top scorers). In challenges like these that can become very repetitious very quick you need to offer up that WOW factor to grab consistently. If your image comes up more consistently at the end of peoples voting queue then you are probably in trouble. Luck of the draw there. While I gave this a 7 I would not have been surprised to see it mid 5.
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07/06/2011 10:32:53 PM
nice shot, but blurry.


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