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03/26/2007 04:06:13 PM |
| I like the lighting... this is a really neat shot! |
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02/13/2007 12:28:09 AM |
| I find this to be your most interesting photo. There is really some good motion between the gate, the leading lines, the shadows, and your model. The mood in terms of colour fits nicely to the mood in her face. And I love the light,partial as it is, with all teh shadows, all over her body and face. |
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08/18/2004 05:58:33 AM |
Lovely picture, the lighting composition and the feel of soltitude is really charming. Hopefully you will do much better next time. Nice work
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08/17/2004 05:06:27 PM |
Voted eralier, returning for comments.
Yes, the VP is certainly implied and the human form gives the image an extra boost. |
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08/14/2004 01:18:58 PM |
| Great shot with good range of lighting levels. The model looks a little bit stranded in the middle though...how about cropping the bottom to just below her feet as our eye is pulled to where she has come from....not where she is going??? |
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08/13/2004 06:41:12 PM |
I just wondered about the many vanishing point photos that were so boring because of the lack of a 'real' point of interest. Adding some human interest would work and voila, I was presented this photo;
Like the composition (use of person & positioning in frame+shadow box, angle),
shadows (lines lead, texture of the fence on the floor),
lighting (shadows/ person's body & face).
Another interesting factor is the balance between the purple pants in the foreground and the purple floor in the background. The purple works well with the yellow/orange (natrium light?).
The vanishingpoint leads back to the person again and that is cool. |
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08/13/2004 06:13:54 PM |
| Really like the lighting! |
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08/13/2004 11:56:23 AM |
| Ok challenge picture, but you captured a good emotion shot. I would give this up as an entry and crop to focus on the girl. |
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08/13/2004 04:29:48 AM |
| I like the colours but the dof could be improved and the composition. |
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08/12/2004 01:12:02 PM |
| This is very good, I like how you have put emotions into your vanishing point, Only thing is that she has hot spots on her shirt and forehead But I dont think its a big problem in this picture, Good luck :) |
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08/11/2004 05:43:18 PM |
| hi I dont really think this is acurate to the theme but i think the pic is wondeful, the atmosphere, light, shadows, mystery, the girls expression and posture is great |
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08/11/2004 01:15:46 PM |
| Odd title. There is something to the light on your model, but the vanishing point seems incidental to the composition. Not to the scene, you understand, as the extension of that bridge/alleyway thing is obviously useful in giving locational information, but the fact of the distance and convergence suggested by the distance seems entirely incidental to the scene. 6 |
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08/11/2004 06:14:07 AM |
| A real sense of loneliness is wonderfully portrayed here. |
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08/11/2004 05:01:03 AM |
| Nice. I like the light and how the road/bridge almost dissapear in the darknes at the end. |
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