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Noa
Noa
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Challenge: Free Study 2011-07 (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-5D Mark II
Lens: Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8L USM
Location: sweeming pool
Date: Jul 30, 2011
Aperture: 4
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/320
Galleries: Family, Children
Date Uploaded: Jul 31, 2011

 this is Noa, she's the daughter of my friend, this shot was taken at the swimming pool while her father gone away..:))
PP:curves+USM

Statistics
Place: 110 out of 343
Avg (all users): 6.0191
Avg (commenters): 7.0000
Avg (participants): 6.0164
Avg (non-participants): 6.0286
Views since voting: 627
Views during voting: 244
Votes: 157
Comments: 13
Favorites: 1 (view)

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 08/13/2011 02:55:42 PM
Critiquing.

First of all, a fabulous portrait with an intense psychological connection between subject and viewer. There is an immense amount of depth in those dark brown eyes and those eyelashes...stunning.

I like the slight vignette, it added a lot of nice pastels into the image.
I enjoy the childish nature of the image. The wet skin, the biting the lip, the bright bathing suit. However, I don't like the angle. I wish you would have gotten down on her level. You eliminate her neck with the angle. It would be nice, as the viewer, to be at a child's level looking into her eyes.

Besides that, the image is great. The water-drop bokeh adds to all the little magical things going on.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/06/2011 01:44:32 PM
Beautifully done. Great textures, subtle details. The tones are perfect.
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 08/06/2011 12:54:44 PM
Those eyes grab me every time.
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 08/06/2011 12:37:31 AM
Very charming and beautiful
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 08/05/2011 09:21:47 PM
Nice shot. I like your point of view. And for some reason, I like the eyelashes stuck together.
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 08/05/2011 08:42:21 PM
I love this. Beautiful portrait. The water, the eyes, the crooked mouth. Just great.
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 08/05/2011 06:34:19 PM
The eye contact and sharpness are quite something.
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 08/03/2011 02:30:05 PM
beautiful, capturing eyes, my favorite portrait entered
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 08/03/2011 01:43:14 PM
Nice light and beautiful model. Shes a cutie... Great portrait!!
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 08/02/2011 02:55:25 PM
Gorgeous eyes!
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 08/02/2011 09:30:43 AM
Beautiful capture. Sincerity.
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 08/01/2011 11:08:03 PM
Wonderfully honest.
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 08/01/2011 02:54:22 PM
Love the sharp focus and the framing. What a wonderful pair of black eyes and engaging eye contact of your sweet model...
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