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08/18/2004 05:54:42 PM |
| Too much contrast. Plus, there is no real clear focus to the pic |
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08/18/2004 04:18:44 PM |
| In this very busy image you've done two things to simplify - narrow DOF to blurr the background and isolate the subject, and desaturate to draw attention. But my eyes are draw two ways - the bright desaturated flower - and then the dragon fly which is not at first apparent. I think desaturating the dragon fly would work better - or desaturate all the plant life - show how plant and animal life are different... |
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08/18/2004 12:58:10 PM |
| A little too dark to be able to discern detail. The bug gets camoflaged in the background and composition is a bit too cluttered. |
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08/18/2004 02:54:05 AM |
| messy composition. Need to think what you are trying to show, what the subject is. I see a distracting background, a damselfly facing sideways, a messy flower. Subject totally unclear to me and no impact. |
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08/17/2004 02:07:44 PM |
| the colors are off and the broken stem right across the main image is distracting |
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08/17/2004 12:03:59 PM |
| Lots of potential but the focus is soft on your subject and the background is way too busy. |
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08/17/2004 04:31:57 AM |
| this seems so cluttered that I can hardly make out what it is. |
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08/16/2004 07:29:52 PM |
| At least on my monitor, this is pretty dark. I am afraid I am losing the significance of the various elements in the picture. It is vry busy and gives my eye no place to rest. |
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