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08/29/2004 09:57:03 PM |
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Wow fantastic focus here! The flower just pops out ther eat you. Only thing I'm not to sure of in the photo is the dark corner. My eye was pulled from the fantastic flower to the "black hole" of nothing so to speak. You might want to try cropping it just slightly different. In a whole though this is a fantastic entry. Nice work. |
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08/23/2004 12:50:20 AM |
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08/23/2004 12:43:08 AM |
Congratulations on your 25th. A delicate and sensual addition to your nice port. |
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08/22/2004 08:50:04 PM |
this is gorgeous! love the form, the detail, the toning, the composition! soft, yet dynamic, yet almost abstract! |
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08/20/2004 03:21:39 PM |
the soft toning of these leaves really work well (unlike most others B&W/toned images in this challenge). great work. |
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08/20/2004 05:10:49 AM |
I like the lighting/shadows, lovely tone too... |
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08/20/2004 02:25:31 AM |
i really like the tones and the composition. 9 |
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08/17/2004 02:09:21 PM |
why not leave the color - this is somewhat neither BW nor pastel - I like the overall composition though |
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08/16/2004 11:00:38 PM |
This is gorgeous! It works so well as a black and white! You have great detail throughout! And the lighting is wonderful! Great job! |
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08/16/2004 07:17:58 PM |
interesting shot - since it's a repeating patter - i might try getting in closer to get more of the petals textures, and maybe un-busy it a tad - the toning is good
good luck
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08/16/2004 03:18:26 PM |
An excellent specimen - well rendered. I'd crop quite a bit from the bottom so the the edge is just below the small whitest leaf. To me, that's a much stronger composition. As is - it's still an excellent submission. |
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08/16/2004 02:43:03 PM |
Exceptional focus. Contrast and levels are terrific. The black area to the left detracts from a top 10 entry IMO. I am wondering what a full color image would have looked like. Usually desaturating beautifully colored flowers feels wrong to me, but in this case, I think it increased the drama of the picture. Good job. |
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