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Challenge: Free Study 2011-11 (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Sony DSLR-A700
Lens: Sony DT 18-200mm f/3.5-6.3 Aspherical ED High Magnification Zoom Lens for Sony Alpha
Date: Nov 6, 2011
Date Uploaded: Nov 13, 2011

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Statistics
Place: 264 out of 271
Avg (all users): 4.3659
Avg (commenters): 4.0000
Avg (participants): 4.3125
Avg (non-participants): 4.5556
Views since voting: 402
Views during voting: 197
Votes: 123
Comments: 3
Favorites: 0


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12/07/2011 07:14:05 PM
Sorry...somewhat of a "snapshot". Great for family photo albums, but not quite what's expected in a Free Study challenge IMO.

edit to add - "IMO". :-)

Message edited by author 2011-12-08 06:56:47.
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12/04/2011 11:12:30 PM
The harsh sunlight, centered composition of the dog, and nearly cropped of head of the woman, all make me feel that this is more of a snapshot than a thoughtfully planned photograph. The woman is staring at the camera awkwardly and the dog is staring at something off screen, which both ensures that nothing interesting is happening within the frame for the viewer to look at, and rather the viewer wonders what is happening outside of it. If the dog was looking at and engaging the woman, and the woman was looking at and engaging the dog, this might have been different. The way it is, they are in complete disharmony and the viewer feels this. Even just cropping out the woman entirely would have made this a much more powerful photograph.
I am not trying to be critical in telling you this. Rather, I am trying to meaningfully explain my low vote (as so many people often call for) so that you may improve in the future. This photograph is sharp and mostly exposed properly, it just needs a more thoughtfully captured moment, to make it great. 4
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12/02/2011 01:29:43 PM
Good attempt but I'm not really moved by this, the main participants are too static and I'm unsure whether the ball is floating or travelling through the air, I wish you well with it
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