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08/26/2004 12:34:41 AM |
I think the previous commenters made pretty good points. Especially the being a little dark around the sleeper and the spanse between the two subjects.
For me this would have been a more meaningful shot had the sleeper actually been (or appear to resemble) a homeless person. Kind of a Haves and Have-Nots type representation. As it is, it just comes off as staged to me. The light on the aluminum frame near the bottom kind of distracts me a bit.
Maybe just using Car Headlights from the sleepers feet direction would have lightened things up a bit.
Neon challenge or not the concept you have going here is an interesting one. I like it. |
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08/25/2004 11:30:07 PM |
| hee-hee, I got it....irony....love those shots....despite the overall image quality... a 8 for creativness and thinking deep along with a message too... |
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08/24/2004 12:06:51 PM |
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08/24/2004 06:11:25 AM |
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08/23/2004 10:58:23 AM |
| nice and ironic, a little too dark on the person |
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08/22/2004 10:23:58 PM |
| Eerie ... you almost don't notice the sleeping figure, and even after looking at it for some time, I wonder if that's really what I'm seeing. |
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08/20/2004 05:16:54 PM |
| It seems to need more contrast. Have you tried tweaking it in Photoshop? |
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08/20/2004 01:40:23 PM |
| Too dark and not very interesting |
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08/20/2004 12:21:45 PM |
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08/19/2004 02:59:54 PM |
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08/18/2004 02:51:42 PM |
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08/18/2004 01:03:50 PM |
| This picture evokes emotion. I like it a lot, but I wish I could see the guy "not sleeping on the Sealy Posturepedic" a little better. |
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08/18/2004 08:52:14 AM |
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08/18/2004 12:31:35 AM |
| the composition is a bit akward with the main focus being at near the very bottom and near the very top. Compositionally there is a vast 'desert' between these two focus points and its not working very well. Great idea, exectution could have been stronger. |
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08/18/2004 12:10:31 AM |
| Not a particularly interesting shot... The lighting is not great for the shot and I can't really see much of a relation to the challenge topic. There is a neon sign in the window... sure :) |
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