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09/06/2004 05:08:53 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
Hi MotoCycleBoi...
This is a nice shot for a wedding album. I can't really offer you much 'critique' on a shot of this nature, because you are not in control of the total environment. There are some elements of this photo that could be better obviously, but without total control, they would not be possible. One of the most difficult issues of shooting outside is keeping the model's eyes from sqinting. It doesn't look like you were working in sunlight, which is good, but maybe the light behind you is bright enough to make the people squint their eyes. The wind could also be contributing to that as well...
Weddings would be fun to shoot.. keep up the good work :)
John Setzler
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08/31/2004 11:47:29 PM |
| I like the way the bride's veil is lifted by the wind, looks as if you caught just the right little puff of breeze, nice capture and crop |
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08/31/2004 08:30:08 PM |
| Beautiful wedding shot. The veil flowing in the wind and the offset of the couple really make it. Excellent job! |
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08/30/2004 05:15:52 PM |
| Lovely movement of the vail. The light was kind of flat, but the composition and dynamics are great. And of course, it's a great subject for the challenge. |
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08/30/2004 01:36:07 PM |
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08/30/2004 11:14:38 AM |
| The whole group of 9 participants loved the wedding theme. Al loves the veil blowing in the wind. |
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08/29/2004 02:22:22 PM |
| This is a really nice shot. The only thing I noticed was the right side of the grooms tuxedo seems to fade into the dark shadows. |
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08/28/2004 10:28:43 PM |
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08/28/2004 08:55:52 PM |
| Great use of the bride's train. |
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08/28/2004 12:00:04 AM |
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08/27/2004 08:32:11 PM |
| I like this wedding shot, it could be a good idea to add some soft focus effect in it. Great composition, well done work. |
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08/27/2004 03:52:23 AM |
| What a beautiful wedding picture. Seeing people get married always gives me hope for the future. I love the way her veil billows out. |
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08/26/2004 10:26:56 PM |
Maybe it's just too late for me to still be up, but has this been resized without maintaining aspect ratio?
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08/26/2004 08:07:23 PM |
| Very good. I hope it lasts. |
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08/26/2004 10:55:24 AM |
| great use of the head veil for composition |
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08/26/2004 12:54:04 AM |
| I love this as a wedding shot. The wind-blown vail is amazing. More closeness like a kiss would have got a higher vote from me |
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08/25/2004 09:17:06 PM |
| Great capture - is that the wind taking the veil? oh well it balances the composition fantastically - 8 |
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08/25/2004 08:54:08 PM |
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08/25/2004 01:23:53 PM |
| Lovely composition. The veil especiaqlly looks nice being swept away like that. Could have moved the people slightly to the left though as the break in the foliage is distracting. |
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08/25/2004 07:51:26 AM |
| A top-rate wedding picture. Excellent colors and composition. Though pose, it speaks a lot of hope, wishes and optimism. Congratulations to them and to you. |
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08/25/2004 07:47:46 AM |
| This is a lovely wedding portrait. I like the way the veil sweeps out to mirror the gown's train, filling up the left side of the shot. I think the little yellow flowers speckling the grass are a subtly exquisite touch, espeically the few that pop up in front of the gown. There is also a cluster of foliage to the left that is a nice spray of texture, balancing that half of the shot. It's hard to tell but the groom doesn't appear to be looking at the camera and his tuxedo blends a bit too much into the shadows of the background. Not a big deal, but for me, it's the only thing that prevents this from being a PERFECT wedding portrait. I gave this a 7 but I'm going to up it to an 8. Good luck. |
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