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06/06/2006 07:53:03 AM |
Sheesh, don´t really feel qualified to comment as you kicked my ass in this challenge but you wanted a comment so here it goes.
You specifically asked about the hand. I don´t see what bothers you so much, I think it looks pretty cool and "in sync" with the rest of the shot. However, if you mean you wanted more light on it, I would just suggest just that, light it with a monolight and make sure using a red/yellow filter of some sort as the light from the monolight would differ vastly from the lighting from the flames. If you were to do that, lighting it from above would be my suggestion, I like that the part that turns away from the flame is in shadow. Nice work my friend, 6.5+ and could easily have gone higher too. |
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06/03/2006 03:49:10 PM |
remindes me of Piro in X-man.. this is so cool |
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06/03/2006 03:42:01 PM |
Hello, Greetings from the Critique Club.
As requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission. Please keep in mind this is a personal opinion.
Well Rikki, what can I say? ;-)
First of all, I really liked to read how you've arranged this shot. I'm sure a lot of people were thinking: "How did he do this?!"
Ok, about the image. You've managed to shoot a great photo again. The compo looks great and the shape of the flames are gorgeous. I think I might have cloned the top (left) part of the flame away, because it's pretty tight at the frame of the image.
I think the high ISO was a bit too high, right now the hand and the flames look very grainy and I think that didn't do good for the photo.
The hand at the bottom is great and with my monitor not too dark. I'm glad you included your hand, allthough it must have been hurting a lot.
Compliments to you for another great photo and for being so brave ;-)
I hope you've found this critique helpful. Good luck with future challenges!
Message edited by author 2006-06-03 15:44:49. |
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06/01/2006 11:39:55 PM |
We used to do this to tennis balls as kids - and play tennis at night - in the neighbours orchard using the rows of trees as a net. Never thought to take a photo of it though... |
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06/01/2006 11:27:00 PM |
Great job Rikki. very proud of you. Congratulations on your top 20 finish. |
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05/30/2006 05:33:08 PM |
Good set up, Rikki. Just like my Illusions II photo (but Ididn't use fire, of course.) |
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05/30/2006 10:05:42 AM |
As in my previous comment, I am waiting for 'how to do it' detail :)
congrats on top20 |
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05/29/2006 12:50:41 PM |
I really thought this would be the Blue Winner! |
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05/29/2006 09:22:29 AM |
If I could have voted I would have given it a 10 ;) This was one of my favorites of the challenge. |
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05/29/2006 12:28:59 AM |
Dang....... I thought this should have done much, much better.
Super, super photo, Rikki! |
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05/28/2006 11:51:45 PM |
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05/26/2006 09:02:30 PM |
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05/26/2006 04:23:23 PM |
Very dramatic! Just wonderful light! You have MY 10! |
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05/26/2006 01:28:35 PM |
wow this is cool! now throw this ball of fire on someone :> |
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05/26/2006 04:51:55 AM |
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05/24/2006 10:01:31 PM |
a little tighter crop from the left would have made this even better |
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05/24/2006 07:36:49 AM |
Beautiful photo. it go my attention when i open the challenge..well done |
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05/23/2006 05:19:39 PM |
Fascinating..though not logical! |
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05/23/2006 03:27:47 PM |
Good job of capturing the flame. |
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05/23/2006 02:46:49 PM |
The shape of the flame is beautiful. |
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05/23/2006 01:53:49 PM |
Nice! I like the lighting and image here. The cropping seems a bit tight at the top. |
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05/23/2006 07:27:52 AM |
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05/22/2006 06:04:10 PM |
Great effect with an excellent result - 8 from me. |
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05/22/2006 02:11:52 PM |
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05/22/2006 12:56:21 PM |
He who holds the flame hold the secrets.That's hot. |
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05/22/2006 02:08:19 AM |
wow! I am eager to know how you did this |
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05/22/2006 12:24:25 AM |
i would suggest not grabbing that ball of flame...ouch...great shot though! 9 |
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