Sie Wartet
by whatsinaname

Comment by Imagineer:
Shot is too dark, sloppily composed (tilted) and has little of interest to hold the viewer. It sounds harsh but I believe in honesty - so sorry if this angers you.

Some remedies that spring to mind are:
1. shoot from anything other than eye level (above the head or floor level perhaps)
2. find a focal point - a platform being swept, a man looking at watch, a baby crying - anything!
3. get into a position where you have some good light on the subject or use the flash but diffuse it by wrapping it in tissue paper so that you don't bleach out subjects close to the camera.