good ol' blue
by CrAcKpOt 909

Comment by skylen:
Nice balanced composition. Main problem is the lighting, it's not very interesting coming from the front like that. Too flat and harsh. Is it on-camera flash? (The round shadows made on the wall above the bases of the skinny vases are funny, made by the flash's reflection in the table.)

If lit by natural window light or some nicely diffused indirect lighting, it could be much better. The right vase has some cracked out chunks up top that are distracting.

good ol' blue
by CrAcKpOt 909

Comment by joyeaux:
I would play around with the lighting on this one

Order of the Keys
by CrAcKpOt 909

Comment by Bassie:
Definately an everyday object but not a very appealing picture to me. The table cloth seems to have better focus than the keys. 5

Order of the Keys
by CrAcKpOt 909

Comment by photom:
Keys turned into a pretty common theme for the challenge. I like the inclusion of the state key ring. Composition is boring - too centered.

Order of the Keys
by CrAcKpOt 909

Comment by whiteroom:
darker background would have been better, perhaps?

Order of the Keys
by CrAcKpOt 909

Comment by mandyp:
The background is a little distracting. It would help you to adjust the colour levels so that black is really black - you'll find it makes all the difference.

Order of the Keys
by CrAcKpOt 909

Comment by thomasheany:
This is a terrible shot. I don't think you have really woked on it. C'mon, you can do better. Move the keys around and look from different angles. I am sure you can find a better angle, background and arrangement than this. It's not even in focus. Did you really try for this?

Order of the Keys
by CrAcKpOt 909

Comment by mffnqueen:
focus needs a little bit of work, everything here is blurry.. try to avoid putting things in the dead center of the photo - use the rule of thirds, or at least take it from a more interesting angle. the background needs to go, too.. stick with solid colors, so they don't detract from your focal point

Order of the Keys
by CrAcKpOt 909

Comment by mrwaffles989:
Poor focus, not very intresting or original, and looks last min.

Order of the Keys
by CrAcKpOt 909

Comment by arngrimur:
This is everyday stuff but a bit to dull, the lighting could be better, are the keys sharp?