Don't Roll Over
by dopydood

Comment by persimon:
*Critique Club*

You have a really nice composition here. I don't think there is anything to improve on the crop or framing. Your horizon is very level, and the subject on land going across diagonally forms a nice flow for the eye. The only thing I can suggest to improve this photo is to work on the colors. Though the colors are nice, they seem a little flat. You have such nice textures in the water, plants, teddy bear. Bring out that texture with some more contrast maybe or some adjustments to the shadows and highlights. If you have Photoshop, you can fine tune it with a curve adjustment. I wish the teddy was closer to the subject too.

Congrats on your first challenge entry. You did very well! Look forward to seeing more from you. Best of luck.

Amy

Don't Roll Over
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Comment by emayner:
I'm jealous, but it could have been cropped more

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Comment by RLangs:
Cool

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Comment by O'Holleran:
LOL! good idea

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Comment by Commando303:
Hehe.

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Comment by Nyck:
wooo dangerous???

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Comment by sherpet:
Lovely...

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Comment by BeeCee:
Lol, this is so cute. I love the teddybear. Maybe a bit more level adjustment.

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Comment by ppnye:
Doen't look very comfortable to me.

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Comment by kari1:
Interesting pic ... takes the challenge to a new zone.