The W Hallby
yetibenComment by BMacD: Hi! Here’s a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression:
Leading lines drew my eyes to the end of the hall. Nothing in focus.
Composition:
Very centered, almost perfect mirrored composition. Leading lines very effective.
Subject:
Met the challenge well
Technical:
Thank you for including comments. Too bad you didn’t include your camera settings. I can only guess what the camera did. There is a tutorial on how to get the info from your metadata. Most programs used for viewing will let you right click, properties, advanced, to see all the camera info.
Your meter was probably set for center priority. This would have given too much priority to the bright doors at the end. A slower shot with a smaller aperture setting would have increased your depth of field.
Summary:
Welcome to DPC! Congratulations on your 71% placement with your first entry. Best way to learn is to take lots and lots of pictures, then decide what works for you and what doesn’t. The tutorials here are good for the technical stuff. Previous forum threads are also a good source of information. Then if still in doubt, post your own question, people are very helpful!
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