R.A.I.N.N
by kimberlyMai

Comment by Tiny:
Has real emotion ,this is certainly in my topsters.

R.A.I.N.N
by kimberlyMai

Comment by Leo:
Her expression is disturbing. The b&w treatment, water (shower), expression, combines to give this a "Psycho" feel. I think this should finish in a 6+ realm. (The title is going over my head now. Interesting to find out the meaning after the voting.)

ETA: googled R.A.I.N.N. changes one's perspective / perception of the image...

Your Sweet Smile
by kimberlyMai

Comment by snaffles:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Great studio setup, just needs a reflector on the left a bit more to kill the shadows. The vivid eye makeup is fun to look at and offsets her eyes and the pumpkin very well. But I do wish the edge of the lollipop wasn't so close to her nose, it draws attention to that area, and for the wrong reason. If it were just a couple inches lower or turned a couple of degrees to the side, we could have seen that nice lopsided smile she has and the pumpkin's smile too.

Feel free to PM me,

Susan

Le plaisir des sens
by kimberlyMai

Comment by Denielle:
A nice portrait. Would like to see the face a bit softer... but love the eye make up, and the sensual way she is eating the chocolate. Nicely done

Your Sweet Smile
by kimberlyMai

Comment by jmritz:
Lovely

Your Sweet Smile
by kimberlyMai

Comment by SwordandScales:
Now, let me say this. I really like this shot. What I absolutely cannot deny, is at first I thought the pumpking was attached to your nose, and that made me laugh. I have recovered, and am now providing you with an 8.

Par
by kimberlyMai

Comment by snaffles:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

I laughed when I read your comments because I've done that too, bought Alpha-Bits to use only as props :-)

OK now getting down to brass tacks, the concept is great but for once I think the b/w let you down. It really doesn't work for food photography, of photos of food if you get my meaning. The letters look like they're made of rock but the spoon and to some extent the dof tells us that they're cereal. Add the liquid in the bowl being something other than milk, and it seems to throw people off.

Otherwise it's a decent image, especially done on the fly, so keep up the good work!

Feel free to PM me,

Susan

Your Sweet Smile
by kimberlyMai

Comment by Denielle:
Nice picture. Love the eye makeup on the model (had to throw that out there). Good shot and fitting title

Keean first Christmas
by kimberlyMai

Comment by grahamgator:
A moment to cherish and you captured it well; such a cutie. I have one of my daughter at this age in a Santa suit and it has always been one of my favorites. (voted earlier)

Par
by kimberlyMai

Comment by Bensted:
Very well captured, it cannot have been easy to get that DOF