Soon to be sealed
by BJokerud

Comment:
I like the concept, put not the quality of the photo. It's always better to deal with 640 px on the longer dimension, it makes your photo more enjoyable. I am not happy with the lighting, the tones are not really nice and a lot of texture is lost. I like though, the composition. Just an idea, it would add a lot to your photo to include the subject of business or the environment into the background. A blurred cityscape with sky-screapers, or some computers as the product, anything. It would make your photo live! (3)

Dear Emily
by oldgrouse

Comment:
Sorry to say that, but I really can't see much of a conception in your composition. Let's get closer to your subject! Get rid of the distracting elements with a good crop and focus more on the main subject which is the lady in front of the computer. A good stoch photo has very few things on it, and all those things support the main story. Try to find the best angle which describes the story what you want to tell us and you will reach a much better result next time. Try many viewpoints, later on, you can choose from more. (2)

You Wouldn't Understand Anyway
by oscarthepig

Comment:
The photo is not bad, though, the challenge was about capturing a business person. I miss the person on this photo, sorry. (3)

Make The Slopes Your Office
by skasuba

Comment:
This is my only 10 in this challenge. I love the environment, the unusuality of the story you tell here. I love the way you desaturated colours, though, the smile and the business wear with the snowboard tell the story of a real colourful manager life! You did a great job! I would immediately apply for any job advertised with this photo! (10)

My Favourite Drink
by MCsaba

Comment:
Gratulálok a jól megérdemelt gyözelemhez! Gyönyörü makro, nagyon finom részletekkel.

Message edited by author 2007-10-17 13:41:23.

Sunrise Over a Very Low Tide
by namastedc

Comment:
I am not a fan of this border, but the colours are loveable and I like the mood very much.

We're STRONGER when we pull in same direction
by h2

Comment:
I love the tones and the texture. So far this is my favourite. Good luck. :-)

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by Anastasia

Comment:
I love her make-up, this is simply beautiful! Both the photo and she.

Fun with the new Cherry?
by kje83

Comment:
Harsh lights on the face, busy background and lack of conscious composition. Shame, because her blond hair, turquoise clothes and cherry colour phone would work well if lighting and composition was set up properly.

Brooke!
by 777STAN

Comment:
This is a snapshot... Needs more contrast, composition and a proper background. Try diffusing some light into her eyes (a golden diffusor would work well here) and avoid the blow out on the top of her hair. She has beautiful eyes and skin, keep trying with her.