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| 06/08/2012 04:47:16 AM |
Wingsby HarveyGComment: Who would give this a 1? Regardless it is still a great shot and I love it Harvey! Good score and probably not as high as you wanted but you should feel good about regardless. Nicely done! |
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| 06/01/2012 01:59:25 AM |
Fiery by gyabanComment: Your commitment and passion for photography is astounding! From conception to capturing and the final execution – everything is in a league of its own. Pity that the ultimate top spot was not claimed – but that’s why we will have more challengesâ€Â¦ so you can WOW us with your indescribable talent. Above all I’m amazed you have a full time job AND still married! |
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| 05/23/2012 02:13:27 AM |
Autum-Harvestby TrompieComment: I was sure this would finish higher. Like Abra said below - it was probably overlooked too quickly by too many voters. Keep it up! |
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| 05/23/2012 02:05:25 AM |
Autumn through the eyes of a Child by RianBotesComment: Way to go Rian. Taking a little break clearly hasn't done any harm to to your photography skills! Thanks for the story even though I knew some of it already - I can see why this shot meant to much to you... and a ribbon whose colour matches the shot perfectly! |
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| 05/16/2012 02:06:24 AM |
Corn Fieldby AmmieComment: Yes! You just had to do well with this challenge Amanda and you didn't disappoint! Lovely view - you are so lucky to see this every day. The flow of field to the tree and the layers in the BG work very well. Well done |
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| 05/08/2012 01:12:28 AM |
Dawn Lightby AmmieComment: Awesome Amanda! Well done on a great finish in a FS. Keep up the great work. |
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| 05/02/2012 08:06:11 AM |
Double Frameby AmmieComment: Mooi Amanda
I agree with Gaby and her cropping suggestion. I really like this shot and looks almost painted. Very arty indeed. Well done on a nice score! |
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| 04/24/2012 03:34:48 AM |
Money can heal most thingby kasabaComment: Obviously this is a sentimental shot for you. Hope Flocki makes a super quick recovery!
As for a technical crit:
The focused area is perfectly placed for a pleasing composition. It took me a while to work out that the head is on the left looking in the general direction of the leg.
The OOF areas and the white areas around the border add to the feeling of waking up from an operation and being half conscious / drugged. It works well here. I didn’t vote on this shot but probably would have given it a 6. It looks like a nice snapshot that you edited nicely and colours and PP effects work well but it is not an amazing shot that takes my breath away.
Not sure how you could have improved on this image with PP. You did well with what you had but the voters probably didn’t connect with it and as Vawendy said - it is a bit of a stretch to connect to the challenge topic even if it did cost a fair bit to have this procedure done. Voters don’t seem to want to think hard about something. It must be there in their face and easy for them to give a high score to within the 5 seconds that most people seem to spend looking at a shot. |
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| 04/19/2012 05:56:01 AM |
Peas in a podby kasabaComment: All the 1's, 2's, 3's and maybe even the 4's will be the people that take the challenge description very literally. If you had taken the extra peas out so that there were only 2 left in the pod this would have scored above 6 guaranteed!
Composition works nicely and the leading lines take you up the page from bottom left to top right, right past the main subjects - the peas! Well done.
I can tell by the shadows there were two lights above the pea pod. It really helped to bring out the detail in the transparency of the pod and I like it a lot. The shadows could have been a bit softer by using something to diffuse the lights between the subject and lights like white paper / white sheet etc. That would make the shadows have less of an "edge" and be more pleasing to the eye.
You shot it on ISO 200 - try go for 100 wherever possible. DPC hates noise and although 200 ISO shouldn’t give that much noise I see a fair bit here. Perhaps your original was quite a bit darker and you brightened it a lot in PP - that also adds a lot of noise. If I'm wrong then I'm stumped???
DPC also loves smooth soft even backgrounds. Your white BG looks a bit yellow on my screen and is a little "textured". It might be due to some noise but probably the type of BG you used for the shoot. I see some dust spots bottom left and top right that can be cleaned up in advanced editing. You can also remove the little bits of pod that are sticking off like threads. I'm telling you now some people would mark you down a point or two for that! Its better to remove it before the shot is taken the PP is easier. |
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| 04/19/2012 05:34:43 AM |
Deceptive Beautyby kasabaComment: Macro isn't my thing so take this comment with a pinch of salt...
As the others have said below there isnt anything / much in focus. DPC loves sharp focus and on macro shots it is even more important. Yes shallow DOF was required for this challenge but something clearly needed to be in focus to qualify for the speed voter that rushes through and votes on a photo in less than 5 seconds.
I see your apperture was 5.6 - you might have wanted to try and shoot it at more like f/16 or smaller to increase the DOF you would get... the counter side of that is that you either need a longer shutter speed or higher ISO. If this was handheld then it would also be a reason why it is not pin sharp - 1/13 of a second is pretty slow for this type of work. It needs to be nearer 1/200 sec to keep the image from being blury.
It is a nice abstract looking shot but abstract normally doesnt do too well here... that is if you are worried about the scores. |
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