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by Gnarf

Comment:
wow, I think that is very powerful. I think it may be a tad dark, use those levels to bring some brightness into it and the impact would be much bigger. this really is great as is too though, I would love to see it printed 30 by 40!

great job

Droplets of long awaited rainfall
by Someamateur

Comment:
ohh I wish this was tack sharp...

Earth - The cradle of life
by nicklevy

Comment:
lighting is a little rough here

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by dwterry

Comment:
this one is very cute. I like the idea alot. it doesn't hurt that you got a pretty senior! I think the lighting is nice and the expression is spot on. great job

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by dwterry

Comment:
woo budy, these night time/late evening shots really are awesome, you could build a whole look around them and you do them well. the movement and the energy of this image is just killer! I like that she is walking towards the camera and the confidence she seems to have. this is what a senior picture is all about. when she is thrity and look at this it will still have impact...great job. I think that your lighting is nice and moody, and the mood is in a series of images not just this one which adds to the value, but also the length of your sales session. that could mean more money though. to get picky again I think that the light in her eyes could be better. what ever that light source is just get it up a little bit higher and you would have nailed that problem.
other then that though, this image is great! I really enjoy the color harmony of things too, that is something alot of photographers skip over these days.

good job

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by dwterry

Comment:
I think this one is almost there...I think the extreme camera tilt is a little to far, maybe if it was tilted the other way. right now it looks like she is leaning up and aginst the tilt and the creates tension, as apose to her leaning with the tilt wouldn't create so much tension. maybe, I might be wrong about that. the big thing that bothers me though is her eyes, and how dark they are, I don't know how you use the lighting here, but if it's all natural just don't have her lean so much into the railing.

there are some major things I do like though. I love the body part of the pose and the arms and the legs make for great line, another reason why I think the tilt doesn't need to be so much. The hands are nice and soft they don't look to posed, the expression on her face really is nice too.

I think you are almost there with this one, but as is it's still a nice image. I would love to hear what the model thinks about it.

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by dwterry

Comment:
this is very nice, I really love the expression and the lighting is nice with the background being darker then she is, creating a mood. good job. I think that the loss of detial in her hair may be bothersome in a print, it depends on how flat the black is, and the few blown out sequence may be a problem too. I think overall that is getting very nit-picky and the goods way way outweigh the bads.

great job as always.

Live. Laugh. Scream for freedom.
by purpleflutterby13

Comment:
I like your idea, and I think your title takes it up a notch, but I think I lose it with the hands, that just seem weird and the lack of light in her eyes. turn her body a little more towards that sunset and things would look a lot better. we have that highlight coming down here arm and across the side of her face but there is no light on her front, it's all on her back

butterfly
by hanneke

Comment:
very nice, I really love this shot. I like the use of the dirt and the out of focus with the subtle color. great job! my first 10 of the challenge.

pilar
by gaston

Comment:
like the idea, but I think this frame was wrong for this shot.