The abacus
by Jinjit

Comment:
Just one yellow or green bead down the other end would have made this an outstandin shot compostion wise. It would have added motion and tension and give the eye something to look at well as break up the ladder effect caused by the shadows and rods. Gave you a 9

Peg, Post, and Beam
by eggv

Comment:
Excellent idea but your composition could use a little work...just feel the beams stop the eye from flowing through the photograph. If you had cropped the photo where the wheel for the wagon, near lower center, and framed that area in..Just feel it would have been a better composition and you woul dhave had more Low Tech involved int he photo..eye wanders to much...very near miss gave you an 8

A tribute to Thomas Edison
by Gabriel

Comment:
Looks Like Beacon Hill in Boston

like swiftly moving water
by ursula

Comment:
NICE EMPHEMERAL QUALITY..VERY GOOD COMPOSITION

Darwin Falls
by Gordon

Comment:
EXCELLENT..RIPPLES IN WATER HAVE OFTEN BEEN USED THROUGHOUT MANY PLAYWRITES,THEOLOGIANS TO EXPRESS TIME..CLASSIC 10 OUT OF 10 STARS

Solid2Liquid
by EddyG

Comment:
FEEL IT SHOULD HAVE AND PROBABLY WOULD HAVE WORKED BETTER IN BLACK AND WHITE..AND WOULD HAVE LIKED TO SEE A DRIP IN THERE TOO.

A good book just seems to make time fly...
by dwterry

Comment:
nICE ATTEMPT BUT i WOULD LIKE TO HAVE SEEN DIFFERNT TIMES APPEARING ON THE CLOCK FACE.FEEL COMPOSITON COULD HAVE BEEN MORE THOUGHT AS WELL.

Hourglass
by PerezDesignGroup

Comment:
GOOD COMPOSITION CREATES LOTS OF TENSION BETWEEN SUBJECT MATTER AND BACKGROUND TO CREAT AN ADDED DEPTH OF FIELD..9 OUT OF 10 STARS

...only for a moment, and the moment's gone...
by Sammie

Comment:
nICE TITLE FITS THE PICS APPROPRIATELY..MEETS THE CHALLENGE BUT COMPOSITION LACKS A LITTLE CREATIVITY..;LQQKS MORE LIKE AND AD TO SELL THE TIME PIECE...8 OUT OF 10 STARS

The Blues: Reflections on Christmas Shopping
by Arcanist

Comment:
OUTSTANDING COMPOSITION..WOULD HAVE LIKE TO SEE SHADOW FROM LEGGS A LITTLE NARROWER TO LOOK MORE LIKE THE CLOCK HANDS..10 STARS