self-2.jpg
by kevrobertson

Comment:
I like your expression in this shot and your interaction with the equipment. The lighting is off in that the large red light on the left dominates - it could be cloned out or tamed down. The white light in the upper right is distracting - again cloning out would work. The strong reflections on the upper equipment are again pulling us away from your portrait. They could be toned down. I like the red lighting on you very much. It creates a wonderful mood. You may be able to crop this to create a better balanced composition. Try taking some off the left and top. I also like the perspective on this shot. Very strong and "manly."

branch
by tcmartin

Comment:
Strong tonal range usage. The composition is off for me - too centered and not enough of the actual branching. I think a slightly lower shooting angle would have given a stronger composition. I do like the hardware in the foreground. 6

Dead Branch Drifting
by Shecoya

Comment:
Beautiful piece of wood and setting. Your lake is pouring out the right side of the image or give the impression that it is. 5

IMG_5137
by Rikki

Comment:
You made the right choice. The lines on the other shot work much better. Also, the parking lot in the lower left of this shot doesn't enhance the shot. The small piece of green on the other shot would be overlooked (mostly) by the DPCers, but not the parking lot. I do like the foot placement on this shot. It has a very nice line. Wonderful concept. Congratulations on your strong showing.

Becky

Dusk & Labrador
by hideout

Comment:
Heidi, Congratulations. A great shot and an incredible finish. Way to share Utah.

1869 - The Golden Spike
by jrtodd

Comment:
Congratulations to a fellow Utahn. It's a great catch. I'll be watching your work in the future and expect I'll see wonderful images.

Patience and Granola Bars
by trnqlty

Comment:
What a nice catch and memory.

Big Bend
by trnqlty

Comment:
This landscape has a nice foreground, interesting mid-ground and awesome distance. The colors work well here and the sky sets off the whole thing. Well done.

Mexico
by trnqlty

Comment:
The colors and textures are working well on this one. You are so sharp on the top half on the shot that it makes the brush seem out of place, since it is not as sharp.

On the Border
by trnqlty

Comment:
Not quite as strong as the 1st two. It is slightly OOF and looses the impact the other two had. I do like the colors in the mountains and sky especially.