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09/18/2005 11:07:46 PM |
Pros: Excellent use of gray tones. I really like the composition and angle here. I'm a sucker for railroad tracks too. Even your frame was well done in my opinion.
Cons: none - just a wonderful photo
- Linda
Message edited by HBunch - Removed Critique Club status. |
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09/13/2005 11:23:48 PM |
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09/13/2005 10:54:16 PM |
I am not sure about the frame, but great thinking with this. |
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09/13/2005 09:08:50 PM |
hmmm...would have been cooler if the pic was closer to where it splits |
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09/13/2005 10:48:09 AM |
You have a winner. This is excellent. The frame helps the image a lot. 9 |
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09/13/2005 08:24:45 AM |
Nice interpretation. I may have picked the spot where it branches from itself to accent it but I like how its included. Good job. |
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09/12/2005 01:39:17 AM |
I think this would have been more effective if you had taken it from a lower point of view and showed more of the tracks going off into the distance. |
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09/10/2005 10:32:37 AM |
stunning, just love it, sorry no input - just admiration |
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09/09/2005 11:04:08 PM |
Nice lines and composition. Good focus and I think the B/W works well. Not sure about the border though. |
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09/09/2005 11:14:04 AM |
I think this picture would be more interesting if it had been cropped with the tracks off center. |
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09/09/2005 06:25:48 AM |
Nice job on this shot. I like your choice to show detail in the track. Again...nice job. |
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09/08/2005 04:24:06 PM |
Great angle and take on the challenge! |
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09/07/2005 11:30:38 PM |
Strong tonal range usage. The composition is off for me - too centered and not enough of the actual branching. I think a slightly lower shooting angle would have given a stronger composition. I do like the hardware in the foreground. 6 |
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09/07/2005 11:13:53 PM |
The subject which is the branch takes a backseat by being too far away from the viewer and thus out of focus. I like the different approach though. |
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09/07/2005 11:11:17 PM |
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09/07/2005 07:57:52 PM |
Good Job, I like your take on it. 9 |
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09/07/2005 11:22:58 AM |
think the perspective would be a little bit better by the camera being just a little lower |
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09/07/2005 05:02:15 AM |
very nice black and white photo. like the composition a lot. 9 |
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09/07/2005 01:05:27 AM |
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