This Lady Owns My Heart!
by 777STAN

Comment:
Few things IMO:
Grainy
Focus could be better
Subjects to close to the background
Light reflecting from the glasses
Flowers a bit to high and to much to the left
The mans shoulder is a bit up like the arm is streching out (taking the pic)
I am not an expert but I will try to comment on this.
All those things are possible to fix. Using NeatImage with the out of focus option would get rid of the grain. Contrast and -brightness could darken the black and give life to her hair. Polarized filter could take the reflected light from the glasses. Stand a bit further from the background and maybe put a reflector (f.x. aluminium paper) to light up your back giving a "further away" effect. Use a tripod to take the picture.
Hope some of this helps.

Key To My Heart
by JPR

Comment:
A bit do dark IMO. Nice idea.

Having My Heart In The Right Place
by Mr_Bond

Comment:
You have to work a bit whith this one. It is too dark IMO and the head should either be off or on.

Simply LOVE
by NstiG8tr

Comment:
I am rating this as text is allowed. Don't think is is though!

:)
by notbiscuit

Comment:
I am rating this as text is allowed. Don't think is is though!

Heart - less
by tryals15

Comment:
<3 Nice effect. Think I would have liked it better in colour. <3

Waiting for Her
by tate

Comment:
Nice thoughts coming from you! :-)

Youth Interrupted
by CalliopeKel

Comment:
On the other picture she looks a bit younger. Here she looks like she has a story to tell.
Really nice work.

I Didn't Do It
by shabbychic

Comment:
You are a Genius!

secret room where the popular dpc-ers get together and vote 10's for each other and 1's for you
by Bebe

Comment:
Seems to me that you have found a way to join them :-)