Old Highway Fourby
mpetersComment: ::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
This is why I did not enter road ... what a wonderful shot, nicely balanced colours, looks great in both thumbnail and full size.
Composition:
Well done, the composition is lovely. Take note of what the voters have said ... although they do contradict each other which does not help lots. I think that taking into account that the picture could have done without the skyline, but keep everything else may have helped in progressing it further.
Subject:
Meets the challenge well. I just love the yellow line. I can understand you wishing to lighten the barn and windmill ... but they still worked well for this level of challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
Well lit, but natural lighting is a good thing. I think that the contrast was worked well for this entry. I can't see the dust spots maybe I am not looking hard enough.
To grow its vote?:
Think about the cropping. Apart from that I am not sure, I think it is great ...
Summary:
Fantastic shot... if only we had places like that here :)
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari
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