Gone Fishing!!!
by nidici

Comment:
Okay - technically this is not that great; but despite that there is still something fantastic to it - it really holds my eyes.

Beasts
by Siggav

Comment:
Suberb movement - really powerful

Magic Hour
by Breeee123

Comment:
Glorious colours, and a beautiful sense of motion from the siloette. And yet it just does not work - mainly because of the unnatural purple on the clouds, which really gives the editting game away. I believe a landscape crop of the bottom half of the image would have been much more powerful.

Misunderstanding Gravity
by JimiRose

Comment:
Superb - I love it. All of what annig said. Wonderful seense of movement. Shame I didn't vote.

Where Water and Earth Meet
by eqsite

Comment:
Hi Gary - congratulations on an excellent showing for the team.

IMG_9947-01.jpg
by talj

Comment:
I would give this a 10; maybe even regardless of challenge. Um, no, that would be bad. Still love the shot though.

... legs
by Claya

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

Hi Clay,

Is this your leg?

A good concept - many of us have very positive connotations with beautiful, silky-smooth, shaved legs. Unfortunately you haven't really conveyed the idea of silky-smooth here. I think perhaps if there had been more smooth leg, and less ripples of foam it would have doen better. My main issue here is the lighting. There is a little bit of noise in the foam shadows and in the tiles in the background which indicates inadequate lighting. Was this shot under the normal bathroom lighting? The tiles in particular add nothing to the overall image - perhaps a closer crop on the leg would have worked. In conclusion - showing more leg is good.

It is my hope that these insights are helpful and constructive. Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique. And please remember to mark it "Helpful" if you found it so. Good luck with future challenges.

Cheers
Paul

Ribbons of Indulgance
by Lipstudios

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

Hi Andrea,

Congratulations on a very good execution of a very difficult concept. I've learnt from my own experience just how difficult it is to photograph brown chocolate in an attractive fashion. I think you have doen a superb job of getting your lighting just right on the folds of molten chocolate - they look beautifully silky-smooth - this is what your image is about, and is why it did as well as it did. The excessive blow-out on the pouring chocolate however looks harsh; and with this challenge harsh is bad. Likewise the wrapper, especially the gold, is harsh, and detracts from the smoothness. It could be argued that it provides the a contrast to emphasise the smooth, but I think that could have been achieved with less wrapper. One idea might have been to have a white background to brighten the image up - brown on black leaves little scope for your subject to stand out.

It is my hope that these insights are helpful and constructive. Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique. And please remember to mark it "Helpful" if you found it so. Good luck with future challenges.

Cheers
Paul

Line of Travel
by Venom

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

Hi Brandon,

Welcome to DPC. Congratulations on your first challenge submission.

Railway tracks were a fairly common choice of subject matter for this challenge - this makes it all the more difficult for you to make your submission stand-out from the crowd. It does however mean that one of the best ways you can learn from this challenge is to look at all the other rail shots, especially those that did well, and really consider what they did differently and what impact it had on the final product. What POV (point-of-view) did they use? What time of the day did they shoot? Where are the shadows? What post-processing did they do? I notice that the first four rail shots all chose a B&W duo-tone conversion to make the shots look out of a different era. They also used a change in the tonality to emphasise the vanishing point - often with the vanishing point itself a bit blown out.

On the positive side, your shot is technically sound, and represents a good starting point: it is in focus and well framed. I think you might want to start developing your post-processing skills so that with similar shots in future you will be better equiped to bring all that is good out of the exposure.

It is my hope that these insights are helpful and constructive. Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique. And please remember to mark it "Helpful" if you found it so. Good luck with future challenges.

Cheers
Paul

Diddy 'Photog' Lane
by Buckeye_Fan

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

Hi Gayle,

The picture of the pear is pretty darn cool; strangely engaging, and with an odd sense of movement. I know the flames are buring up, but it looks like the pear in falling downwards.

The main thing which has stung you here is your choice of border and text-style. Niether ap(pear) to work with the pear, or even each other. A great shame as you would probably have scored much better with a simple text style and no border.

I don't really get the Diddy 'Photog' Lane link. Perhaps a better title would have been something like Dangerous Pear Light (or something) to directly associate the image with the title.

It is my hope that these insights are helpful and constructive. Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique. And please remember to mark it "Helpful" if you found it so. Good luck with future challenges.

Cheers
Paul