Idled
by beckydi

Comment:
The light and the colors of the buildings are pretty, but I'm on the fence about the inclusion of the fence in the foreground.

Workbench II
by Psquared

Comment:
Some sharpening and some contrast (bringing up the lighter parts, but leaving the darker parts) would make this pop.

Industrial painting...
by cyparis

Comment:
I really like the detail of the paint splatters, so I might have focused just on that, leaving out the newly painted part. Adding a little more contrast would also emphasize the lovely tones in the rust.

Legoland
by odriew

Comment:
I LOVE your title. It's witty and makes an even stronger connection with the challenge since legos are building blocks and building is, ya know, industrial. Anyway, your title definitely makes your image much better. I rarely give extra points for titles, but yours will definitely get a few : ) I really like the colors of your image, but I think I would crop some of the sky so the viewer won't get lost in al that negative space.

Old Industrial
by BaldurT

Comment:
I love the texture and the color of the metal, but I wish the lovely texture of the wood was also in focus.

Get Your Motor Running
by phoozt

Comment:
Having something in focus on either side of the image with a lot of out-of-focus space in the middle makes my eyes jump back and forth across the image, which makes for a very tiring viewing experience. The drawing is intriguing, so I would have preferred to have the left of the image cropped.

Time to Repaint
by boone168

Comment:
I wish the can of paint and the brush looked as weathered at the other elements. The bright colors of the can look out of place. That wall is amazing though; would be a wonderful background for a portrait.

Too Late
by hhuddle

Comment:
I find the white spot at the top too distracting. I think a closer (but not too close--just enough to give a definite "subject") shot of the spray paint can or the electrical outlet would have helped focus the attention of the viewer.

1860's Steam Engine
by Enlightened

Comment:
I wish there was a little more depth of field to bring the other two cylinders in focus too.

Summer Salad With Roast Beef, Figs, Tomatoes and Arugula
by bubeltrubel

Comment:
Wonderful image. The lighting is well done and you created a wonderful sense of place with the background (without making it too busy)!