Night Light
by KevinRiggs

Comment:
Critique Club

Good shot! Excellent entry for this challenge. I personally envy you for being able to take this fantastic photo.

Only thing that might have improved it was a deeper saturation of color there was a grayish tone to it overall and making the black a deeper bolder black would have brought out the planet more.

Anna

Feathered
by colorosilence

Comment:
Critique Club

Definately fits the challenge of Negative Space. There is a good bit of detail to the feather, the lighting appears to be pretty good. Your composition is also good.

The only thing this really lacks is the luster to win. As it is right now it reminds me of Forrest Gump without the box of chocolates. In other words it is just a little to plain to win.

Anna

In My Little Boy's Eyes.....
by christyrack

Comment:
Critique Club

Sometimes reflections work sometimes they don't in this case they work well. Nice composition as well. Your little boy has the right look too. He has a questioning look about him, kind of makes me wonder was he asking if he could go next door and play?

The black and white here works well and keeps the reflections from dominating the photo. To bad the two parrell lines from something reflect right through his face otherwise it would be a perfect photo with reflections

Anna

Blackbear At Midnight
by bruster54

Comment:
Very orginal...bear could use a little more saturation I do believe =o)

Please---Not In My Garden!!!
by Gallatin

Comment:

*Critique Club*

This is a fantastic image the color is good the dof used works well the focus is good, there really isn't a thing I would change on this photo.

Your composition is exceptionally well done, I think what hurt you is it is a little week for in the garden. The photo could have been anywhere there was grass or a pine tree and that probably is the one thing that hurt you.

Overall this is a wonderful shot...keep up the good work.

Yellow
by agwright

Comment:
Critique Club

Very good macro. The focus and details are really good. The color is very good as well.

Very nice take on the challenge.

lisa
by johnny_justjohnny

Comment:
*Critique Club*

There is good detail and the focus is very good. The biggest problem I see here is the shadowing and the redtones to the right side of the photo. The take away from what had the potiental to be an exceptional photo.

It does meet the challenge but I would have liked to have seen a little closer crop.

"Not Today, I've Got A Headache"
by GeneralE

Comment:
Very cool shot Paul nice capture of the lazy bird. =o)

SLINKY
by Roseytone

Comment:
Critique Club

Very nice image. The lighting here is almost perfect, a very slight adjustment in the lighting would have made this shot. Your focus is fantastic. The composition is good

As for meeting the challenge, yes slinky is a trend but slinky dog is even more of a trend =o) All kids go through a slinky trend.

Anna

God bless you Thomas Alva Edison!
by sainaz

Comment:
*Critique Club*

Very nice idea just the light is just to low for the photo and with the slower shutter speed you had a lot of blurring of the one hand.

As for meeting the challenge it is a bit weak but it does meet it with a little thought.