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Fishing Guide
12/29/2006 03:02:29 PM
Fishing Guide
by ericwoo

Comment:
A neatly-arranged seven.
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Landscape
12/25/2006 03:59:00 AM
Landscape
by whiterook

Comment:
I think you're destined for a poor score, because you needed to crop out that date mark. I'd recommend turning it off for future challenges. I mean, generally I'd recommend turning it off completely in any case - for digital shots it simply isn't needed, all the information about time of shot is recorded with the file itself anyway, without spoiling the photo.

So, that aside, what do I think of the photo itself? Compositionally I think it could benefit from re-framing. The house in the background slopes off diagonally, and you really need a flat horizon. The photo is over-dominated by the brown trees (I think) in the front, and I don't think it's very well balanced by the house. If you're stuck in winter and wanted a garden shot, I'd have probably tried to find something evergreen, maybe with berries or similar, to keep a bit of colour.

Then, along the top, it feels a bit cramped. So much is in there! The part of a house, the bottom half of a tree, and a section from a second house. It's both too much and not enough at the same time. Neither component is framed fully.

Lastly either the light or your camera has not been favourable in terms of colours. There's a general washed-out appearance to the shot, it all comes across as being pretty muted.

I think if I wanted this shot, I'd have lifted the camera more, to take in less ground and a bit more of the house, and levelled everything off. Then either shoot at a different time of day for more features, or bump up the colour in post.

A leaving-room-for-improvement 4 from me.
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The bean counter (I'm an accountant)
12/25/2006 03:49:06 AM
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Computer Programmer
12/25/2006 03:48:49 AM
Computer Programmer
by Photologist

Comment:
I like this. I mean, being a programmer is never going to net you the most exciting of images, so I like what you've done with this shot.
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the moonlight sonata, pianissimo
12/25/2006 03:45:07 AM
the moonlight sonata, pianissimo
by silverfoxx

Comment:
A different take on the theme brings this shot a seductive seven.
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Editor
12/25/2006 03:43:33 AM
Editor
by levyj413

Comment:
Nice job painting with light (or similar).
Photographer found comment helpful.
---<<  FIRE WARDEN >>---
12/25/2006 03:41:31 AM
---<< FIRE WARDEN >>---
by Falc

Comment:
An expressive six for this, I think.
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Teacher
12/25/2006 03:40:30 AM
Teacher
by Rino63

Comment:
If only all the pupils were that attentive and pliable.. A determined 7.
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"I'm stuck on You"
12/25/2006 03:30:49 AM
"I'm stuck on You"
by Thai

Comment:
How can this be anything other than a great "sticky" shot? Deserved more.
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Pooh's Fantasy (Honey)
12/25/2006 03:29:38 AM
Pooh's Fantasy (Honey)
by crowis

Comment:
Unfortunately I think too many DPCers just don't get or don't like shallow-focussed shots, even when it's used - in my opinion at least - pretty well.
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